isaiah40 wrote:The city inset - I think the text needs to be black instead of the white. With the white text and the bright blue, it is just waaaaayyyyy to glaring.
cairnswk wrote:RBO, i admire your tenacity in working on this...it has taken such a long time for you to arrive at something you like. and imho, it is starting to look good.
Just s coouple of small things from me...
1. are you going to colour over the pipes in those two regions above the city and on univ city
cairnswk wrote:2. it is quite difficult to read the boathouse ???? and fish??? regions over the pipe
cairnswk wrote:3. you have a black crack in the liberty bell <- very stark...perhaps a darker yellow or brown might be better
cairnswk wrote:4. agree with Andy on the background colour of the city...last colour is my pick.
cairnswk wrote:5. on some writings under the brick mortar, some white is blended in with the mortar colour instead of sitting on top of it....makes it look weird for me because the title and other colours in bridges etc goes straight over the top of the mortar....is your text layering sitting behind the mortar layer?
cairnswk wrote:6. cannot quite read the last region in purple in the legend
cairnswk wrote:7. your signature....is that it top right corner or is that a compass?
nolefan5311 wrote:Also, this...
Well, it kind of looks like something lol
ManBungalow wrote:Have to nitpick here, but "less than 4 territories" should be "fewer than 4 territories".
ManBungalow wrote:... do a horizontal flip of the pipe layer, so it goes out of the left margin instead of through the region names.
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