MarshalNey wrote:Industrial Helix wrote:Well, first off I can't read anything. The font is a bad choice and, especially in the mekong delta, is completely illegible.
I can read it- it's not super clear and the font is way too small, but 'illegible'? That's a bit harsh.
The draft could work, gameplay-wise. The legend bonuses are too small to read. You'll have to get rid of some of the flavor stuff and make the fonts much bigger.
Otherwise a very nice first go.
PS - Use the 'BigImg' button to put tags around your image next time.
Well, the illegible bits are the white on white.