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[Abandoned] - Lorn Empire

Postby ISN2 on Fri Feb 04, 2011 10:15 am

Lorn Empire

Many years ago in a forgotten land, there was a glorious empire called "The Great Empire". The empire controlled a vast amount of land, from the mountains in the North, to the seas of the South. After the death of King Glore, the empire fell apart, as his eight sons fought for control. Eight empires were formed by each son and to this day the empires still fight for control. What was the Great Empire has descended into just a Lorn Empire. End the wars and reunite the former Great Empire.

Map Size: 82 Territories (Total)
Play Type Support: All Types
Starting Territories (Where Players May Start): 8
Auto Deploy Territories: 12 (8 Barracks, 4 Villages)
Bonus Territories: 8 Castles
Combined Bonus Territories: 56 (All Territories In Empires) + 26 (All Territories In Farmlands)
Winning Conditions: Take Out All Other Rivals
Losing Conditions: Get Taken Out Or Have No Castles

Update 7:
1. Empires now can one-way attack into farmlands and farmlands can not attack back.

2. Posts are renamed into Villages.

3. Each village can now one-way attack into two empires through tunnels that can bee seen on the map.

4. Graphical tunnel ways added into the map to show exactly where each village can attack.

5. A change in Snowy Lands borders is made to make the Snowy Lands Castle connected into all other Snowy Lands territories like all other Empires (For balancing things).

6. Legend has been rebuilt with 50px more height for adding new info, a small map added to show where are Empires and where are Farmlands, also symbols are added and new rules are written in legend.

7. A few small problems fixed.

8. Natural numbers changed into new rules on the map.

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Map Rules:
1. Each player starts the game on 1 or 2 castles depending on number of players.

2. Each castle has 4 armies at start and has a +1 bonus.

3. Players get 1 army per every 3 territories. The minimum army getting is 3 armies (Like normal maps).

4. There is a barracks territory in each empire bordering the castle with 4 naturals on it. The barracks territory has an auto deploy bonus of 4 per turn.

5. All other empire territories will start with 2 naturals on them except 2 bordering territories with other empires that will start with 16 naturals.

6. Having any 5 empire territories will have a +3 bonus.
Note: castle and barracks are counted as empire territories too.

7. Having any 2 farmland territories will have a +1 bonus.
Note: villages are counted as farmland territories too.

8. Every player must have at least 1 castle or will be eliminated.

9. Six of farmlands in middle of map have low number of naturals on them, 2 or 4. Sixteen of bordering farmlands with empires have 8 naturals and the other four farmlands are villages.

10. Villages are territories in farmlands named "Grail Village", "Silk Village", "Viller Camp" and "Tent" and will start with 16 naturals on each and will have an auto deploy of 8 each turn.

11. Villages can one-way attack into empires using tunnels shown on them map.

12. Empires can one-way attack into farmlands.


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Re: Eight Empires [Idea And A First Draft]

Postby natty dread on Fri Feb 04, 2011 11:23 am

Develop a theme for your map. "8 empires" is sort of vague. Where/when are these empires and why are they fighting?
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Re: Eight Empires [Idea And A First Draft]

Postby ISN2 on Fri Feb 04, 2011 11:57 am

natty_dread wrote:Develop a theme for your map. "8 empires" is sort of vague. Where/when are these empires and why are they fighting?


It's a plan from my mind, nothing is real in the map, so if I make a fake theme and story won't there be any problems?
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Re: Eight Empires [Idea And A First Draft]

Postby natty dread on Fri Feb 04, 2011 12:35 pm

Not if the story is good enough to support a map.

Check out some existing maps in CC. Look at Feudal Wars, Age of Realms 1-3, Thyseneal, Age of Merchants... these are all fictional maps but they have a strong background story which is well reflected by the theme and gameplay of the maps.

The idea is not to make up a "fake theme", it's to make up a theme that is fictional but believable. It should be something that is not just made up to fill in the gaps of a map, but something that could stand on it's own as a story. You don't need to write a whole novel for this, but the basic idea of the story should be something you maybe could base a novel on.
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Re: Eight Empires [Idea And A First Draft]

Postby benga on Fri Feb 04, 2011 12:35 pm

ISN2 wrote:
natty_dread wrote:Develop a theme for your map. "8 empires" is sort of vague. Where/when are these empires and why are they fighting?


It's a plan from my mind, nothing is real in the map, so if I make a fake theme and story won't there be any problems?


if you make up a story and theme
its not fake anymore
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Re: Eight Empires [Idea And A First Draft]

Postby ISN2 on Fri Feb 04, 2011 12:59 pm

The first thing that came to my head is something like this:

A king who was controlling a big empire with 8 sons, and after his death every son called himself the new king and because of that discrepancies has began and the empire has been divided to 8 small empires around the mainland farms. from that time, all of them are in fight with each other and every son is trying to kill other sons and be the only king.


What do you think? is that good for going on something like it?
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Re: Eight Empires [Idea And A First Draft]

Postby natty dread on Fri Feb 04, 2011 1:11 pm

That's good for the immediate reasons of the war. But it still doesn't tell us anything about this empire. What is it, where, when? Is this in an alternate universe, or on our world, but in an alternate history, or perhaps a future scenario?

Try playing some of those maps I mentioned. Check out the Age of Realms -maps in particular. See how much work there has been done for the background? And how well it shows in the gameplay and theme?

Like I said, don't just try to come up with something that fits the current draft you have. Just pretend the map doesn't exist, and try to come up with an interesting story. Then when you have a strong background story, fit the map to the story.

Protip: Look into histories for inspiration.
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Re: Eight Empires [Idea And A First Draft]

Postby ISN2 on Fri Feb 04, 2011 1:46 pm

Thanks a lot for your help.

natty_dread wrote:That's good for the immediate reasons of the war. But it still doesn't tell us anything about this empire. What is it, where, when? Is this in an alternate universe, or on our world, but in an alternate history, or perhaps a future scenario?

Try playing some of those maps I mentioned. Check out the Age of Realms -maps in particular. See how much work there has been done for the background? And how well it shows in the gameplay and theme?


I checked those maps in "Feudal Wars" I saw a 1 line explain only and I think this map is based on real and Feudalism era, am I right?

At "Age Of Merchants" I saw a long story something like you say and I didn't see any story for "Thyseneal2" and "Age Of Realms" maps ...

natty_dread wrote:Like I said, don't just try to come up with something that fits the current draft you have. Just pretend the map doesn't exist, and try to come up with an interesting story. Then when you have a strong background story, fit the map to the story.

Protip: Look into histories for inspiration.


The reason that I'm going for this draft is that the shape of a such land came to my head and I based the map on that shape, I explained what came first for me in first post.

Now for example if I say "Thousand years ago, in the Europe or Asia or Middle East or anywhere a such thing happened for empire of that area and the story that I'm writing from my mind comes here" won't be it some kind of lie?

I have some inspirations already but non are real and don't have a real place or date.

Also I got another name for this map in mind after thinking to the story I told, "Lorn Empire", how is it?
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Re: Eight Empires [Idea And A First Draft]

Postby natty dread on Fri Feb 04, 2011 4:40 pm

At "Age Of Merchants" I saw a long story something like you say and I didn't see any story for "Thyseneal2" and "Age Of Realms" maps ...


The story is there. It doesn't have to be spelled out for the map to have a story.

The point is creating a theme. Like I said, you don't need to actually write that story. Just that the story exists, and everything about the map is consistent with that story. This way your map will have a strong theme, no matter if the story is fictional or historical.
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Re: Lorn Empire [Map Idea With Graphics Designed]

Postby ISN2 on Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:53 am

I did some big updates, check first post and feedback, thanks : )
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Re: Lorn Empire [Map Idea With Graphics Designed]

Postby Industrial Helix on Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:01 am

Nice graphics! Very pretty... and since when has dark been a color?

The gameplay is going to need something to differentiate it from Feudal or Age of Realms... btu I think you're on your way with that.

The last thing that bugs me is that the image is way too tiny... you should be able to post the image using the big img tags. Generally, you're not going to get a whole lot of support if anyone has to do anything more than open your thread to see the image... its lathargic, but its the way the foundry rolls.
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Re: Lorn Empire [Map Idea With Graphics Designed]

Postby grifftron on Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:08 am

those graphics are amazing man, can't wait to see what else you got up your sleeve since your only in the Melting Pot! Ill be following.
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Re: Lorn Empire [Map Idea With Graphics Designed]

Postby ISN2 on Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:13 am

Industrial Helix wrote:Nice graphics! Very pretty... and since when has dark been a color?

LOL, I know dark is not a color but if I wanted to name it black, there was a blue one too so I could not name it's land with BE * ...
I will change it later to another color or maybe using some alternative name if I find any for black or blue!

Industrial Helix wrote:The gameplay is going to need something to differentiate it from Feudal or Age of Realms... btu I think you're on your way with that.

I'm trying to play those maps to see what are they that everybody talks about them, but first thing I see is that I think my map supports 8 player but Feudal Wars not if I'm right?

Industrial Helix wrote:The last thing that bugs me is that the image is way too tiny... you should be able to post the image using the big img tags. Generally, you're not going to get a whole lot of support if anyone has to do anything more than open your thread to see the image... its lathargic, but its the way the foundry rolls.

Edited first post. Thanks for the note ...

grifftron wrote:those graphics are amazing man, can't wait to see what else you got up your sleeve since your only in the Melting Pot! Ill be following.

Thanks body : )
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Re: Lorn Empire [Map Idea With Graphics Designed]

Postby Industrial Helix on Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:24 am

Feudal War supports 6, Feudal Epic supports 8.

And overall, don't be too keen to stick with the color empire names. It might be better to come up with something that has a sort of story to it rather than simple colors.
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Re: Lorn Empire [Map Idea With Graphics Designed]

Postby ISN2 on Sat Feb 05, 2011 12:12 pm

Industrial Helix wrote:Feudal War supports 6, Feudal Epic supports 8.

And overall, don't be too keen to stick with the color empire names. It might be better to come up with something that has a sort of story to it rather than simple colors.


Oh, I didn't see Epic one. 8-[

About names, you are right, but more I think, less I get any ideas, I just got 2 idea, 1st naming them on races like Humans, Undeads, Elfs and so on that is completely different from the story I have, so this idea is out, 2nd I name the son's of the king and then use them for Empires, for example, Philip's Empire and so on ...

What do you think about this? any ideas?
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