Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - credits added
Posted: Mon Dec 10, 2012 6:54 pm
Thanks for the credit.
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cairnswk wrote:Oneyed wrote:...
credits added. cairnswk just your batterfly is missing, so please add here somewhere
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Oneyed
Oneyed. I'm happy with the credit given. butterfly not needed, thanks anyways.
cairnswk wrote:Please be advised that you may have my credits from CC to dispose of as you wish...but wisely!
Oneyed wrote:...or just patience now ?
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Dukasaur wrote:Prepare the champagne!
(Or slivovitz... )
cairnswk wrote:Oneyed, i am seeing the same story
cairnswk wrote:Oneyed...the story is good, but i know you may need better English...if you like...
"In 1992, the Czech and Slovak governments made the decision to divide the common state which became valid on January 1, 1993."
Only if you think this is improvement...
Oneyed wrote:cairnswk wrote:Oneyed, i am seeing the same storycairnswk wrote:Oneyed...the story is good, but i know you may need better English...if you like...
"In 1992, the Czech and Slovak governments made the decision to divide the common state which became valid on January 1, 1993."
Only if you think this is improvement...
this is your advice. I used it except "In 1992" I used "During"...
Oneyed
Oneyed wrote:cairnswk wrote:Oneyed, i am seeing the same storycairnswk wrote:Oneyed...the story is good, but i know you may need better English...if you like...
"In 1992, the Czech and Slovak governments made the decision to divide the common state which became valid on January 1, 1993."
Only if you think this is improvement...
this is your advice. I used it except "In 1992" I used "During"...
Oneyed
Also, I think you need to elaborate a little more, perhaps one more sentence on why they decided to do that, or the actual result of their agreement. Something like that.
nolefan5311 wrote:
"In 1992, the Czech and Slovak governments made the decision to divide the common state which went into effect on January 1, 1993. As a result, two independent countries, the Czech Republic and Slovakia (or Slovak Republic) were created." Using "became valid" implies that prior to Jan 1, 1993 it was invalid.
Oneyed wrote:nolefan5311 wrote:
"In 1992, the Czech and Slovak governments made the decision to divide the common state which went into effect on January 1, 1993. As a result, two independent countries, the Czech Republic and Slovakia (or Slovak Republic) were created." Using "became valid" implies that prior to Jan 1, 1993 it was invalid.
will care more about grammar
I used during 1992 because it was long and complicated process. everything as finance, army... must be divided. and only in Jan 1, 1993 it was official and this is also date of creating new states Czech republic and Slovak republic.
so could we find any final version? thanks for help
Oneyed
cairnswk wrote:Oneyed wrote:cairnswk wrote:Oneyed, i am seeing the same storycairnswk wrote:Oneyed...the story is good, but i know you may need better English...if you like...
"In 1992, the Czech and Slovak governments made the decision to divide the common state which became valid on January 1, 1993."
Only if you think this is improvement...
this is your advice. I used it except "In 1992" I used "During"...
Oneyed
Oneyed. I am still seeing a story which says "...become to valid..."Also, I think you need to elaborate a little more, perhaps one more sentence on why they decided to do that, or the actual result of their agreement. Something like that.
I actually don't beleive this is necessary to elaborate...if people want to find out more there is always Google or other search engines.
The map is about fragmentation of said country...it has bonuses for both republics...therefore the result must be that the state was divided
nolefan5311 wrote:...
Well then why put the sentence in there at all then?
Oneyed wrote:ok. could we gowith this version? I can have it not too long...
Oneyed