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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/4

Postby Industrial Helix on Fri Nov 13, 2009 3:39 pm

Alright guys... this hits just about everything we talked about. Lowered the bonuses, got rid of Die Groot Trek and the Cape Colony Bonus. I tried on the one way attacks and mountain passages that Jefjef mentioned... they just seemed out of place. It's like, if there's mountains there what's the point in putting a pass? Anyway, here she is:

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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/13 p. 3

Postby jefjef on Sat Nov 14, 2009 10:15 am

Pretoria and region is a big ole bottleneck. Putting that route in gives you a little more flow & gets rid of a couple pocket dead ends.
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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/13 p. 3

Postby natty dread on Sat Nov 14, 2009 10:34 am

Well, IMO it's good to have some bottlenecks, if there's not too many of them. They're nice places to fort all your troops.
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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/13 p. 3

Postby Industrial Helix on Sat Nov 14, 2009 12:47 pm

Yeah, I designed Pretoria to be that way given its significance as a major population and resources area. While it is definitely a bottleneck, it doesn't necessarily grant the person who holds it a bonus. With two more territories to defend, yes it gets the bonus, but still, the number of territories is large, meaning it will take time to gain it. I think it should be alright.

I got a couple of questions for you guys:

the border between Griguqatown and Kheis, is that clear enough? I think I might have to break the word GriquaTown into two and fit it differently.

Also, what do you make of the mountains?
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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/13 p. 3

Postby natty dread on Sat Nov 14, 2009 1:00 pm

Industrial Helix wrote:the border between Griguqatown and Kheis, is that clear enough? I think I might have to break the word GriquaTown into two and fit it differently.


I think it's fine.

Also, what do you make of the mountains?


Good otherwise, but they look a bit smudgy and unfocused. Maybe you could sharpen them a bit. Also you could add some shadowing on them.
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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/13 p. 3

Postby Industrial Helix on Sun Nov 15, 2009 6:45 pm

Ok, got rid of the dotted lines in favor of anchors. All the ports connected anyway. I redrew all the borders because they were kind of lumpy. I also made some minor changes to make sure that the small version was going to have room for its army numbers. I added a drop shadow to the mountains and cleaned up some of the fuzzy bits and gave it a sharpen filter. I also cleaned up a few sloppy graphics tidbits.

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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/15 p. 3

Postby natty dread on Sun Nov 15, 2009 7:11 pm

Yeah, that looks better, although now there are some parts that could use some subtle anti-aliasing.

Can't just please some people, eh :D

Also, the anchors are nice. Maybe reduce the glow around them a tiny bit. Not much, just a little nudge.
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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/15 p. 3

Postby soundman on Sun Nov 15, 2009 8:14 pm

I just doesn't look like the anchors fit the rest of the map. Is there another look of anchor you could use?
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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/15 p. 3

Postby Industrial Helix on Mon Nov 16, 2009 10:44 pm

Hmm... natty, what do you mean by anti-aliasing? I know its a photoshop deal but I really have no idea what it is. Thanks for any help or anyone else who might answer this.

Soundman... I hear ya. I might go for a thicker anchor or maybe something a little more wooden style.
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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/15 p. 3

Postby Incandenza on Mon Nov 16, 2009 11:00 pm

I rather like the mountains, they fit in well with the whole hand-drawn aesthetic you've got going...

But I concur with soundman, the port icons don't fit, they're too clean. More to the point, I think there might be too many of them. In a few places there are ports separated by only a single terit, kinda rendering moot the strategic advantage thereof. I think you could safely get rid of Grahamstown and one of the 3 in the east.
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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/15 p. 3

Postby natty dread on Tue Nov 17, 2009 5:36 am

Hmm... natty, what do you mean by anti-aliasing?


Anti-aliasing is a type of blurring, it smooths out the pixelation of bitmap images. Don't know what software you use, so it might be called something else.

As for the anchors, make them a bit thicker. I think what bothers people is that while you have all the other lines drawn with a thicker brush, the anchors seem too "slim" so they don't seem to fit... Make them thicker and they should be ok.
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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/15 p. 3

Postby AndyDufresne on Tue Nov 17, 2009 12:32 pm

Incandenza wrote:I rather like the mountains, they fit in well with the whole hand-drawn aesthetic you've got going...

But I concur with soundman, the port icons don't fit, they're too clean.

Right, I agree with this. I like the theme you have on the map, and I'd adapt the port icons to a style reminiscent of the mountains hand-drawn aspect.

I also still don't like the blue water in the legend, but you already know that. ;)

Have you experimented with colorblind tests to see if your colors are distinguishable? This may be important, especially because of the general lack of signifying color on the map (I.E. continents aren't solid).


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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/13 p. 3

Postby jefjef on Thu Nov 19, 2009 12:08 pm

Industrial Helix wrote:Yeah, I designed Pretoria to be that way given its significance as a major population and resources area. While it is definitely a bottleneck, it doesn't necessarily grant the person who holds it a bonus. With two more territories to defend, yes it gets the bonus, but still, the number of territories is large, meaning it will take time to gain it. I think it should be alright.



Well one more comment in re of Pretoria. That bottleneck is over 10% of your tert total.
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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/15 p. 3

Postby Raskholnikov on Thu Nov 19, 2009 12:31 pm

That\s 5 territories - which together do not constitute a region. One needs to conquer 2 more regions and defend 3 territories for that region. I don't find it that unusual.
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Re: South Africa 1885 Update 11/15 p. 3

Postby Industrial Helix on Mon Nov 23, 2009 11:44 am

I adjusted the anchors... I don't know if they work or not. They're a little thicker.

As for Pretoria, I really don't want to change it as it was a major hub for South Africa. All rail lnes would be going there, all roads would be going there, all economic resources would be going through there. It makes sense as major city to hold such weight on the map.

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