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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby thenobodies80 on Sat Jun 11, 2011 7:45 pm

The map looks great, the only thing I'd like to suggest is to find a way to increase readability of few names. To be precise Anticosti, Bas St. Laurent, St. john and Grand Falls Windsor.

[edit] Also Chaudière looks weird on both versions, no way to have all the text on a single line?

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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby thenobodies80 on Sat Jun 11, 2011 8:12 pm

The xml is ok. :)
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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby Bruceswar on Tue Jun 21, 2011 3:33 am

I cannot wait for this map to come out. Well done!
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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby AndyDufresne on Tue Jun 21, 2011 8:41 am

Indeed, this looks like one I'd add to my list of play.


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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby Industrial Helix on Tue Jun 21, 2011 11:10 am

Dying to play this one as well.
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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby notyou2 on Wed Jun 22, 2011 10:43 am

I've travelled most of it. I want to see if the scenery is as good as the real thing.

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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby Tisha on Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:17 pm

fixed a few things I think, yes?

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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby rdsrds2120 on Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:29 pm

On the large version, Grand Falls Windsor looks a little crooked. Can't wait! (:

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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby Tisha on Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:34 pm

rdsrds2120 wrote:On the large version, Grand Falls Windsor looks a little crooked. Can't wait! (:

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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby rdsrds2120 on Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:43 pm

yeah :), or at least I think so.

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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby The Bison King on Sat Jun 25, 2011 2:52 pm

Looks great! Beta time!
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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby Bruceswar on Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:45 pm

The Bison King wrote:Looks great! Beta time!




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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby DiM on Sat Jun 25, 2011 9:40 pm

just a little bit of nitpicking:

1. the whole frame of the map is slightly tilted to the left.
2. the frame seems to be only on the left/right side and nothing on the top/bottom. that would not be such a big problem if there wasn't the tilting mentioned at #1. because of that tilting we can see that in the bottom right corner the border does seem to continue along the bottom side until it slowly fades away. see image:
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3. the rose from the singing angel overlaps the map frame and even goes beyond that. perhaps move it to the left a bit to avoid that.
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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby Risky_Stud on Sat Jun 25, 2011 11:02 pm

Yes it is nitpicking at this point. Not all of us play with microscopes.
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Re: Golfe Du St. Laurent

Postby Tisha on Sat Jun 25, 2011 11:17 pm

DiM wrote:just a little bit of nitpicking:

1. the whole frame of the map is slightly tilted to the left.
2. the frame seems to be only on the left/right side and nothing on the top/bottom. that would not be such a big problem if there wasn't the tilting mentioned at #1. because of that tilting we can see that in the bottom right corner the border does seem to continue along the bottom side until it slowly fades away. see image:
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3. the rose from the singing angel overlaps the map frame and even goes beyond that. perhaps move it to the left a bit to avoid that.

thank you, didn't see that

I like the cherub overlapping the border.. kinda vine like. does it look that bad?

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