Conquer Club

natty_dread wrote:London is a dirty city full of whores and cutthroats.

WTF? London by no means a dirty city and is not full of whores and cutthroats, no idea on why you think it is and if that is your impression on the city, why the hell are you doing a map of it.

Sorry you feel that way about my home city.

Don't take it personally. Most cities are, once you look past the surface and bling they put up for the tourists.

For that matter, I've decided I won't take stylistic advice for a map from people who live anywhere near it. They all too often have much too close a relationship with their city/country/province and an idealized view of it. All too often they'd like me to make my map in to some kind of bloody tourist advertisement.

I think the overall problem cosmetically isn't London's greenness or its floating nature, but the lack of tonal contrast with the background. Try a much lighter background with more contrast in the skyline - closer to white and black than to dark-yellow-green and darker-yellow-green. The map itself is fine; the background detracts from it.

Minister X wrote:I think the overall problem cosmetically isn't London's greenness or its floating nature, but the lack of tonal contrast with the background. Try a much lighter background with more contrast in the skyline - closer to white and black than to dark-yellow-green and darker-yellow-green. The map itself is fine; the background detracts from it.

Tonal contrast is not the only type of contrast you can use. That is simplistic thinking.

However, I am increasing the contrast I have, maybe this will make it more apparent...

natty_dread wrote:Don't take it personally.

Sorry natty, was just having a really shitty day, did not mean to take it out in your thread.

But my comment on why so dirty and grungy stands though. I mean that a fog like that has not been seen in London for a hundred years and the title is barely there. I can barely see your name, even with the glow. I can understand the style you are going for but it does seem a little over he top. Its as if you don't want people to see your name or even the title. The blue in the river is very bright compared to the rest so why not try to bring the red out in the flag and carry that over to the title.

Why not have the West in there as it is part of London which you have completely missed. Without it, you are geographically wrong. It would be easy to separate Hounslow, Ealing, Hammersmith, Kensington and Westminster. That gives you a 3 territ small continent in Hillingdon, Harrow and Brent. Put a motorway between Harrow and Barnet (M1) for an impassable. There are so many motorways, in London that you can use for impassables.

Going back to the other day, I do prefer the river being cropped at the border like it appears now.

koontz1973 wrote:The blue in the river is very bright compared to the rest

It's called contrast. The playable area is the main part of the map, therefore it has a higher saturation. All the rest are background elements, and thus secondary. Even the flag and title.

koontz1973 wrote:Why not have the West in there as it is part of London which you have completely missed. Without it, you are geographically wrong. It would be easy to separate Hounslow, Ealing, Hammersmith, Kensington and Westminster. That gives you a 3 territ small continent in Hillingdon, Harrow and Brent. Put a motorway between Harrow and Barnet (M1) for an impassable. There are so many motorways, in London that you can use for impassables.

This is a good idea. I'll run it by Bruceswar to see what he thinks.

I got to natty in PM. Go for it!

Ok so here's the next iteration.

Ps. other gimp users might appreciate the feat I accomplished on this map:

I actually thought of a use for the "dissolve" -layer mode!

Oops... I forgot to redo the inner glows. Also adjusted the colour of the new bonus a bit.



So what is keeping the draft stamp for this one? Should be pretty straight forward...

Waiting on the FA's. They need more training/practice.

isaiah40 wrote:Waiting on the FA's. They need more training/practice.

How much practice does one need to move a topic from one forum to another?

natty_dread wrote:

isaiah40 wrote:Waiting on the FA's. They need more training/practice.

How much practice does one need to move a topic from one forum to another?

I want to make sure they know when a map is ready to be moved before they do it.

Ok then. Carry on carrying on...

Hm, I think perhaps the bonuses could stand to be adjusted:

• Northwest: +2
  
  • It's the smallest bonus area on the map, so people would go after it simply for that. Plus, it's not in a central spot (like North Central, which also has two more territories) and it makes it and West really attractive (still 5 borders, but +8)
• North Central: +3 √
• Northeast: +4
  
  • 4 borders and easy access to the City, which wouldn't add a border, either.
• West: +5 √
• Southwest: +3 or +4
  
  4 borders, but Lambeth does bring it down to 3. With no real great expansion opportunities (aside from Lambeth), I could see this going either way.
• Southeast: +3
  
  • 3 borders and easy access to the City, which wouldn't add a border, either.

-Sully

Maybe... those sound pretty good, although I'd rather keep Northeast at +5.

natty_dread wrote:Maybe... those sound pretty good, although I'd rather keep Northeast at +5.

Fair enough, that was a little more iffy than the others. With 7 territories, it's borderline.

-Sully

I've stickied this for now, so hopefully one of the FA's will see this and move it. *hint, hint*

isaiah40 wrote:I've stickied this for now, so hopefully one of the FA's will see this and move it. *hint, hint*

Subtle.



STAMPED! Off you go to grow up with the other maps.

Tsk tsk... you forgot to unsticky. :p

I have no idea what you're talking about natty, this whole "not unstickied" hogwash is just going to get you in trouble.

natty_dread wrote:Tsk tsk... you forgot to unsticky. :p

natty, you're getting just as bad as Sully. It's not stickied!!

I have screenshots to prove it.

Pics or it didn't happen!!