Nola_Lifer wrote:cairnswk wrote:...
koontz1973 wrote:cairnswk, these areas are now good in my opinion but you do need to polish them all up.
Title, good to see the whole thing now. But needs the polish.
Picture (top right) far better. Bottom rights sky is too light, darken that with some blue.
Bridges, some of the best and really work with this style.
The rest of the map, and that is everything, will need to be gone over with a fine tooth comb, changed altered and just generally brought up to standard. Sorry to be blunt about that.
koontz1973 wrote:Like the title in gold, is the rest of the frame going to be like that?
isaiah40 wrote:Russian Jewels?? My first thought on the playable area was stained glass, but doesn't look like stained glass.
The jewels around each picture, get rid of the glow or whatever it is around them.
There is some brown protruding out from underneath the frame area, top, top left and left side.
There is a little blip here:
isaiah40 wrote:I'm liking the leaded glass look on the outside regions, do the rest that way and I'll give you a better answer.
This one now goes up instead of down!
OK.sannemanrobinson wrote:I don't really see leaded glass in it. Maybe if there are some colour variation within a bonus it would look more natural.
The gold ring looks good btw. Integration with the theme could possibly be that the ring was originally full but there are some gaps in it from wear and tear.
cairnswk wrote:glad you like the gold ring, but what do you mean by the rest?
sannemanrobinson wrote:cairnswk wrote:glad you like the gold ring, but what do you mean by the rest?
If it is a gold ring on a window it is more logical if it was originally fult closed. If the edges of the gaps are not so round but broken pieces it might look more natural. Some cracks or dirt or pieces of lead might do the trick.
x-raider wrote:Looking good...
Oneyed wrote:the mosaic looks nice. looking forward to see all map done in mosaic.
isaiah40 wrote:Get rid of the street veins, it is making the map look really "un"cairns like. a.k.a. messy, cluttered, busy, etc.
ManBungalow wrote:The streets do make it very difficult to work out where the borders are.
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