cairnswk wrote:koontz...passing another eye over this for you....
small map....
* Casa de Campo text is a different colour from the others - not as distinct and thus failing legilbly
* the sky blue texts of Sur don't stand out as much as the others for legibility - perhaps this is the drop shadow needing to be more distinct
* Nordeste text is also not as distinct - the pink blurs in with the drop shadow a little and thus is not as distinct for me as the others.
Do not know how the Casa de Campo text became a different colour but you where right.
Fixed.
Brought out all sky blue text as well.
Not sure I see the problem with the pink text. So not fixed. Can you suggest a way for me to solve this to your liking.
cairnswk wrote:both images:
* the crossing image in the legend is not distinctive as the crossings on the map and gets lost - perhaps consider moving that text down a fraction to increase the size of the crossing to make it stand out more
* the yellow line between Ventille and Parque Agustin Rodriguez doe not extend all the way up to the boundary of the man-made lake - any reason for this? looks unfinshed!
othwerwise...this is moving towards looking really good.
Crossings and bridges on both maps made larger.
The path was their so no need for it to go all the way up. Removed the path and redid the line all the way up.
Thanks, always nice to get one of your look overs.
isaiah40 wrote:The first thing I see is that the shadow of the bridges do not match the shadow of the buildings now.
Whoops. Fixed.
On both maps, swapped the orange and sky blue around as well. Something about having the two blues next to each other and added the last shadow that was missed.
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EDIT: New small map.
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