Dont get me wrong DiM, i love the way the map looks. I just think it could be toned done a bit.
also, Maybe compare your creatures with other fantasy type games/books/movies. ice golem/rock golem dont seem to creative imo. Maybe keep one and change one to something else.
This took a minute of research, and i already found a bunch of potential creatures!
Sentient creatures are intelligent aware creatures such as Elves, Orcs and Gnomes."
* Black Orc
* High Elves
* Wood Elves
(click for info)
I look forward to seeing the next update, honestly.
btw: i like the sanctuary ones, they sound dangerous!