Re: A Capital Competition -- Comment Time
Posted: Fri Nov 12, 2010 1:01 pm
Some nice entries.=here. I was going to have a go, but only had time to put together a nice background (that I may or may not use on another map at some point).
Map A: I'd agree with the above comment that a slightly more accurate border to the land would make the map feel less doodle-earthy; it just needs roughening up a bit and not being quite so smooth
Map B: The bonuses are too difficult to work out from the colour-bar. Either similar values need to have similar colours, or you need to find a clearer way of matching the area to a square.
Map C: The title is obviously unfinished, and may benefit from a sky-ish feel to it? It would be nice to have each village/town named somehow.
Map A: I'd agree with the above comment that a slightly more accurate border to the land would make the map feel less doodle-earthy; it just needs roughening up a bit and not being quite so smooth
Map B: The bonuses are too difficult to work out from the colour-bar. Either similar values need to have similar colours, or you need to find a clearer way of matching the area to a square.
Map C: The title is obviously unfinished, and may benefit from a sky-ish feel to it? It would be nice to have each village/town named somehow.