Aleena wrote:ok changed from a gold plaque to a silver one does it look better?
It might seem a little bold - but I was asked to make the name pop a bit...
suggestions - opinions?
hmm, still looks a bit odd
but that's mostly the flowers you drew around it maybe.
Perhaps you can make a normal but pretty title, lying on a large rose or some big roseleaves or something.
The problem is mostly that little roses growing of your title is a good idea, but not so much on this scale in my opinion. So either you make the title and the roses on it bigger or you just take out the roses overgrowing it and integrate roses differently.