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[Vacation - valid until May 2014] -The Chako/K'zari War

Postby DearCyrus on Thu Jul 25, 2013 9:41 pm

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Map Name:The Chako/ K'zari Wars
Mapmaker(s):DearCyrus
Number of Territories:41(+5 neutrals and 4 Killer Neutrals and 1 special (non-combatant) territory. Total:51
Special Features: Killer Neutrals, Auto-deploy, conditional border, bombardment
What Makes This Map Worthy of Being Made: This map chronicles the War that will one day be carried out on a far off planet. Thousands of years from now on the Planet of Chako, The tribes of the island nations were awoken in the night to see fire bursting from the skies. These distant descendants of ours had secluded themselves in order to establish their own culture and have little memory of the journeys our kind once made to the stars. The ball of fire split and fell all around.

The Kzari scout ship had been caught in an electromagnetic pulse and lost most of their instruments... In a last ditch effort to survive, they headed towards a patch of land on the horizon. As all K'zari Scouts are trained to do, they deployed their Telepods To the far reaches of the territories to ensure quick travel, but they were unable to recover and crash landed on the central island. Searching for resources to Rebuild the ship, the K'zari spread out attacking anyone who got in their way... And so it went for a hundred years. The K'zari have only their telepods and genetic replicators to show of their once vast technology, and the People of Chako have learned to fight well, as the Human spirit always will.

The day of the final battle is upon us... Who shall Survive?

The Teleportation stations are linked directly to the K'zari ship, making it attack-able from 9 territories. Units from the K'zari ship can attack any of the teleportation stations.
The player who owns the K'zari Ship at the beginning of the game is designated The K'zari, and receives +5 auto-deploy. The Teleportation stations start neutral.
Update - Version 13
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No longer super sized. I have scaled down the map slightly, scaled down the border significantly, and moved a few names to fit. The interior space of my territory icons is sitting at about 25 px. so I think my 888's should still fit nice and snug.
Updated texture layer and opacity of text-boxes(for visibility of text).

Questions:
How do you feel about the fake data on the left and bottom of the map? Should it stay or go?

Should the Sea routes:
1) Stay as they are (Killer neutral).
2) Be removed completely.
3)Be turned into regular connections, with no territory in between?



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Re: The Chako/K'zari War

Postby MasterGuns on Thu Jul 25, 2013 10:59 pm

looks clean and well colored, but would like to see more detail all around-such as there are on Siege!, arms race, island of doom, super max, pearl harbor for example.... also make the Teleport stations look different from the other territ spots on the board. -MG
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Re: The Chako/K'zari War

Postby DearCyrus on Fri Jul 26, 2013 2:24 pm

Thanks for the input! I am new to this site, and map-making, and can use all of the help I can get. Just to be clear, You mean more details on the map itself, I.e. bushes, mountains,etc..?
Personally I think the maps you listed are in a much different style than the one I intend to make, but I can look into that.
This is my rough draft, and changing the look of the teleport station and Ship are on my to do list. The overall feel that I am going for is similar to the classic map in simplicity of style but with a little bit of glow and drop shadow similar to a holographic display for the Army circles, for a sci-fi effect.
I will repost once I have implemented some changes.
Thanks again!
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Re: The Chako/K'zari War

Postby Industrial Helix on Fri Jul 26, 2013 6:14 pm

Cool story, but an uninteresting map.
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Re: The Chako/K'zari War

Postby DearCyrus on Fri Jul 26, 2013 6:30 pm

Industrial Helix wrote:Cool story, but an uninteresting map.

How would you suggest I improve it? I have NEVER made a map, or art of any type before to be honest. I am on the ground floor here, and am here to learn.
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Re: The Chako/K'zari War

Postby Seamus76 on Fri Jul 26, 2013 11:49 pm

You have a great start, well done!

I think what IH may have been trying to say is that you should incorporate the story more into the map. You obviously have some skills based on the draft, so I think adding the story might allow for more gameplay to be developed based on what you can put on there, and what you come up with(symbols, etc.).

You may want to think about moving the land with Mirova over a little to the left to give you more room for Elo, or move that up, etc. But more room always comes in handy down the road.

Adding the text and a legend will really help bring your idea together, and may provide a better opportunity for people to help.

I use GIMP, so if I can answer any questions just let me know. Good luck, and whatever you do, stick with it.
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Re: The Chako/K'zari War

Postby DearCyrus on Mon Jul 29, 2013 12:20 pm

I have been kicking around some ideas as to how I could spice my map up a bit and I am thinking about skewing the map at an angle to give a perspective view, and possibly adding a grid maybe a hex grid,to give it a tech feel. Still have to see if it can be done without making the land masses appear to small, but it is an idea. What do you guys think?
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Re: The Chako/K'zari War

Postby Seamus76 on Mon Jul 29, 2013 12:27 pm

Personally I would just have to see what it looks like unfortunately, but with that being said, it might be best to knock that out quickly and then focus on the gameplay elements, like the legend, etc. Which again will help get more people commenting on things that will help move your map along to the next step.
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Re: The Chako/K'zari War

Postby DearCyrus on Tue Jul 30, 2013 10:07 pm

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I was thinking something like this...
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Re: The Chako/K'zari War

Postby iAmCaffeine on Thu Aug 01, 2013 5:33 pm

That looks very cool, love the 3D aspect. At first glance my main concern is the amount of chokeholds in the map, but maybe the teleports would overcome that.
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Re: The Chako/K'zari War

Postby DearCyrus on Thu Aug 01, 2013 8:16 pm

Thank you! I did put the choke points in intentionally, but they could also be removed if it restricts things too much. I feel it will force some conflict especially around the teleports, but I guess we will have to wait and see how it plays...
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Re: The Chako/K'zari War

Postby iAmCaffeine on Fri Aug 02, 2013 5:36 am

My main concern is the large bonuses like the blue and pink only being accessible 2 ways.
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Re: The Chako/K'zari War

Postby DearCyrus on Fri Aug 02, 2013 10:15 am

What if I added a sea route between them, that would open another inlet to both blue and pink and possibly put teleport 4 in 3 way congestion... Could be interesting.
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Re: The Chako/K'zari War

Postby iAmCaffeine on Mon Aug 05, 2013 10:47 am

That would be an improvement, in my opinion.
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Re: The Chako/K'zari War

Postby Aleena on Mon Aug 05, 2013 11:03 am

Bottle necking a game around a few connecting points is not a good design, though it makes a good strategic defensive stronghold.

Maybe if you do add Sea routes - to make them available as an option for use - but not as a primary desirable route - you can make it slightly longer then using teleports - maybe 2 or 3 spaces between the lands and also make any water space turn back to neutral every turn - so a player who tries to cross the dangerous waters instead of using the teleports must make it all the way or will be lost at sea....
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