Hi sempaispellcheck
First one thing thats not about the map, whats easy for every one is that you post the images on the last page aswell as the first, you already have sayd in the headline that you have V3 at pgs 1 & 2, what is the correct way to put it
then we dont have to look at both pg 1 and ---> to see what is written and the image (hope i made my self understandble)
Now your new update
about the blurness, much better, its just about gone (hurray
) You got all seperate colors for bonuses now, thats good.
I certainly see an improvement in you map but you have some things you need to sort out.
The outer border, its very rough and pixilated, did you use a pencil tool ? use a brush ( 3 pix for outerborders) I have my brush for borderlines set with 90% transparency, it gives a softer look. ofcourse it depend on how the image appears (soft vs. hard)
The armycirkles, same rough and pixilated, I think you can skip the cirkles in the territories and keep the ones for Ligne, but they are also rough and pixilated.
Innerborder from Montmartre/Gare du nord to La villette, delete the littel piece that crosses over
The flag for bagground is much better, the "red" side just seems kind of "pink" to me
I like your improvements and you are on track for a very nice map, keep it up
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