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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - credits added

Postby chapcrap on Mon Dec 10, 2012 6:54 pm

Thanks for the credit. :)
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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - update 12/07, page30

Postby cairnswk on Wed Dec 12, 2012 12:14 am

cairnswk wrote:
Oneyed wrote:...
credits added. cairnswk just your batterfly is missing, so please add here somewhere :)
...
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Oneyed. I'm happy with the credit given. butterfly not needed, thanks anyways. :)

Please be advised that you may have my credits from CC to dispose of as you wish...but wisely!
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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - update 12/07, page30

Postby Oneyed on Wed Dec 12, 2012 2:14 am

cairnswk wrote:Please be advised that you may have my credits from CC to dispose of as you wish...but wisely!


thanks. I already have this appeal.

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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - xml done. anything more needed?

Postby Oneyed on Wed Jan 02, 2013 3:51 am

xml is done. anything more is needed? or just patience now :) ?

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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - xml done. anything more needed?

Postby cairnswk on Wed Jan 02, 2013 4:35 am

Oneyed wrote:...or just patience now :) ?
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Yes, that, patience.
I think the mods went on holidays over Xmas...seems that way anyways. ;)
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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - xml done. anything more needed?

Postby Dukasaur on Fri Jan 04, 2013 11:22 pm

Prepare the champagne!

(Or slivovitz... :D )
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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - xml done. anything more needed?

Postby Oneyed on Sat Jan 05, 2013 3:28 am

Dukasaur wrote:Prepare the champagne!

(Or slivovitz... :D )


slivovica (slivovice)/slivovitz is far, far better :lol:

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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - xml done. anything more needed?

Postby Oneyed on Tue Jan 08, 2013 1:02 pm

I made a small graphics change. I add story to the map. do you think it is better?
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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - added story to the map. better?

Postby x-raider on Wed Jan 09, 2013 2:15 am

"During the year 1992, the Czech and Slovak Governments made the decision to divide the common state. The dissolution took effect on January 1st, 1993."
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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - added story to the map. better?

Postby Oneyed on Wed Jan 09, 2013 8:28 am

thanks to cairnswk and x-raider for help with story text.

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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - added story to the map. better?

Postby cairnswk on Wed Jan 09, 2013 11:48 am

Oneyed, i am seeing the same story :o
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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - added story to the map. better?

Postby Oneyed on Wed Jan 09, 2013 11:54 am

cairnswk wrote:Oneyed, i am seeing the same story :o


cairnswk wrote:Oneyed...the story is good, but i know you may need better English...if you like...
"In 1992, the Czech and Slovak governments made the decision to divide the common state which became valid on January 1, 1993."
Only if you think this is improvement...


this is your advice. I used it except "In 1992" I used "During"...

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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - added story to the map. better?

Postby nolefan5311 on Wed Jan 09, 2013 12:28 pm

Oneyed wrote:
cairnswk wrote:Oneyed, i am seeing the same story :o


cairnswk wrote:Oneyed...the story is good, but i know you may need better English...if you like...
"In 1992, the Czech and Slovak governments made the decision to divide the common state which became valid on January 1, 1993."
Only if you think this is improvement...


this is your advice. I used it except "In 1992" I used "During"...

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Change it to cairnswk suggestion. Also, you used "become" instead of "became", and that needs to be fixed as well. Also, I think you need to elaborate a little more, perhaps one more sentence on why they decided to do that, or the actual result of their agreement. Something like that.

"In 1992, the Czech and Slovak governments decided to divide the common state into two independent countries, the Czech Republic and the Slovak Republic, and on January 1, 1993, the two countries were created." Using "became valid" implies that prior to Jan 1, 1993 it was invalid.
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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - added story to the map. better?

Postby cairnswk on Wed Jan 09, 2013 12:36 pm

Oneyed wrote:
cairnswk wrote:Oneyed, i am seeing the same story :o


cairnswk wrote:Oneyed...the story is good, but i know you may need better English...if you like...
"In 1992, the Czech and Slovak governments made the decision to divide the common state which became valid on January 1, 1993."
Only if you think this is improvement...


this is your advice. I used it except "In 1992" I used "During"...

Oneyed

Oneyed. I am still seeing a story which says "...become to valid..."

Also, I think you need to elaborate a little more, perhaps one more sentence on why they decided to do that, or the actual result of their agreement. Something like that.

I actually don't beleive this is necessary to elaborate...if people want to find out more there is always Google or other search engines.
The map is about fragmentation of said country...it has bonuses for both republics...therefore the result must be that the state was divided :)
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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR - added story to the map. better?

Postby Oneyed on Wed Jan 09, 2013 12:40 pm

nolefan5311 wrote:
"In 1992, the Czech and Slovak governments made the decision to divide the common state which went into effect on January 1, 1993. As a result, two independent countries, the Czech Republic and Slovakia (or Slovak Republic) were created." Using "became valid" implies that prior to Jan 1, 1993 it was invalid.


will care more about grammar ;)
I used during 1992 because it was long and complicated process. everything as finance, army... must be divided. and only in Jan 1, 1993 it was official and this is also date of creating new states Czech republic and Slovak republic.

so could we find any final version? thanks for help

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