edbeard wrote:very nice. I love the use of the delta. That really makes the map for me.
at the moment it is a bit difficult to see where connections are. Well that's not really what I mean. What I mean is that there is so much going on it's a bit difficult to take it all in. Those bridges really jump out at you whilst the rivers are blended to the map. If those bridges could blend a bit more (maybe have the 'cairsnwk style' bridges where the colours of each side spread onto the bridge like on your CCC map)
I'm sure you'll fix this as you go on but a few of the labels and circles could be placed better. Sometimes they're too close together or too close to a river .
I'm guessing you'll put your sig in the blank space above the title? That blank space is too much at the moment. I'm sure you'd fill it but I'll mention it anyway.
The colours are a bit close to each other since they're muted. This makes differentiating them in the legend somewhat difficult.
I think this map will be quite good!
edbeard wrote:well I didn't know there was an update, but the only difference I can see is that you have labeled each of the continents.
honestly I don't like the way you've done it. I really like the colours you have and the dull look that they give. Maybe try doing a mini-map?
Or just doing the text (for continent labels) in a different way. Or, perhaps blend them in somehow.
WidowMakers wrote:If the rivers are borders, they need to be closer to the color of the sea. Currently they are a little hard to see.
Lightening then up would make the bridges stand out more as well.
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