It looks good, and I like the colours
One thing I would suggest is to change the sizes of some of the territores (unless you want the map to look a certain way)
The regions on the right hand side take up a lot of space, causing the ones on the left to look a lot smaller.
: one more
thing I might suggest is to make the border lines look more natural
eg. the Newton/Cloverdale border is a vertical line, which then joins Fleetwood; which is a hand-drawn line. Maybe you could blur the borders or something and see how it comes out ?
*edits post again*
: last thing for a while (hopefully)
Those islands in the delta are the same deep pink as the bonus. Perhaps you could change the colour of them to make them look seperate ?
It sounds like I'm complaining about this map a lot lol...really I'm supporting it and trying to help you get it out there
Sorry about the novel ^^^