sailorseal wrote:I really like it but I am not quite sure what the theme is.
Maybe i am not understanding you, but i think there is a very clear theme(if you really cant tell it is GOBLINS).
I dont know how you cant see this
hopefully you will once you read this post
Although this theme is clear you may want to play around with it and see what other ideas you can get, in terms of texture for the land and background(i like the goblin theme, so i wouldn't change it o much).
I am confused on a few things and I think they can easily be fixed.
1.Could you change "chiefs" to goblins,or even goblin chiefs, it would make it much clearer
2. You have the bombarding set up more like attack routes, what about instead of those route things, you just say that all "chief"(or goblins) can bombard each other.
Also could you think of some more clever names instead of bloods and muds, fangs and skulls are okay, but i think you could make better.