The territory name "Unoccupied Dutch West Indies" isn't gonna fly from just a game log standpoint, it's too long. And it borders about half the map.
You've got several different colored lines and I'm not sure what they all mean. The red lines with the arrows seem to imply one way attacking, but that would mean Australia can't attack the entire left side of the map. Other than that, the lines are, well, ugly as sin, lol. Sorry.
You are going to have a VERY hard time fitting the army number circles into Lower Papua.
Australia needs to be divided. I count 21 territories! That's insane....