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[Abandoned] - Hawaii Map

Postby esiemer on Wed Dec 29, 2010 9:13 pm

***I took down the poll because there was good support for another map, but I want to focus on finishing this one and not get ahead of myself. I underestimated how long it would take to finish a map. Mahalo and Aloha****

Map Name: Hawaii
Design team:
Concept and design: esiemer and saberty
XML: stofer71

This map is built around traditional CC type strategy with territory and continental control. We chose Hawaii for love/knowledge of the islands and a lack of any Hawaiian maps. Before we found CC we had painted a version on this map on the back of a Risk game board and played it as a change of pace.

The design team including several other CC friends have been playing on that painted board to help flush out game play issues. We welcome suggestions and feedback, as this is our first crack at quenching a map and we have lots to learn.

Map Details:

Continents: 8
Territories: 42 + 6 outrigger canoes (start Neutral 3)

Continent Bonuses: update coming soon
Kauai: ?
O’ahu: ?
Moloka’i: ?
Maui: ?
Lana’i: ?
Hawaii: ?
Ni’hau: ?
Kaho’olawe: ?
Outrigger Canoes: ?

Islands are interconnected via Rainbows/dotted lines as direct paths. Ports are symbolized by outrigger canoes and all can attack each other.

bigimg: temporarily unavailable

smaller version:
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our original gamboard for nostalgia and inspiration reasons:
Click image to enlarge.
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our original version submitted to CC:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t173/ezerok/Hawaii_CC_1.jpg

version 2:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t173/ezerok/HawaiiDraft2.jpg

version 3:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t173/ezerok/HawaiiDraft3.jpg

version 4:
http://i160.photobucket.com/albums/t173/ezerok/HawaiiDraft4.jpg
Last edited by esiemer on Wed Jul 13, 2011 1:35 pm, edited 14 times in total.
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Re: Hawaii Map Ready for Feedback

Postby rdsrds2120 on Wed Dec 29, 2010 10:08 pm

A couple things:

1) Can you put a bigimg tag on that? ;)
2) Need to describe the ports on the map, right now there isn't anything on the actual image to say what they are

3) I think some of the troop circles should be moved around to fit on the actual land masses. You'll have to maneuver the names around a bit to do this :)
The places I noticed this in:
  • Ni'ihau (Just move the circle above the name)
  • Kane'Ohe
  • Waimea (troop circle a little to the right?)
  • Haiawa...etc.
4) Good luck! I hope to be able to play on this someday! Excellent first draft!:D

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Re: Hawaii Map Ready for Feedback - BIG MAP

Postby esiemer on Wed Dec 29, 2010 10:39 pm

thanks rdsrds2120 for the feedback.
i added a BIG MAP tag, am moving the troop circles and the key will include something on the outrigger canoes symbolizing ports. Also working on making the top right and very bottom more aesthetically pleasing.

also cross-posted in design brief forum, excited to get this map off the ground!

big Mahalo (thanks) for the feedback, keep it coming.

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Re: Hawaii Map Ready for Feedback - BIG MAP

Postby Industrial Helix on Wed Dec 29, 2010 11:22 pm

1. Shrink it down and start work on the small map first. You're going to need to make sure everything fits on that before you make a large map.
2. The rainbows bridges are lame.
3. What about moving it more towards the Hawaiian unification under Kamehameha? You could use war canoes for connections, maybe reward holding battle sites and feature the various groupings of Hawaiians before they were united.
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Re: Hawaii Map Ready for Feedback - BIG MAP

Postby greenoaks on Wed Dec 29, 2010 11:29 pm

why have you included 2 auto-deploys ?
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Re: Hawaii Map Ready for Feedback - BIG MAP

Postby esiemer on Thu Dec 30, 2010 12:04 am

thanks Industrial Helix
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1: we read somewhere that its better to start with a bigger map. but you are a cartographer and it makes sense so we checked and the small map (630 x 600) looks fine; its easy to read
2: sorry you think the rainbows are lame, but they are on the Hawaii license plates, drivers licences, the university mascot is the Hawaii Rainbows and if you ever go to the Islands look mauka and you will see them. im not trying to get too defensive, we were just looking for something that reflected the islands and was different from all the straight or dotted lines you see on all maps
3: we'd love to do a Hawai'i historical map, but this map began as a painting on the back of an old risk board that we have been playing for years. we wanted to translate our painted board from analog to digital (Conquer Club) for all to enjoy. we wanted to do this one as our first, and then maybe a Kamehameha, ahupua'a or kahuna style map next incorporating historical context.

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the 2 autodeploys are because when we played our hard copy we thought it was a bit too much of a reward so we thought a 1 autodeploy would make them worth a bit less.

thanks for the feedback guys!!
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Re: Hawaii Map Ready for Feedback - BIG MAP

Postby greenoaks on Thu Dec 30, 2010 12:47 am

do those 2 terits start neutral ?

i also think the rainbows look a bit lame but perhaps that is something that can be improved at the graphics stage

i just looked at wikipedia, lonely planet and the Hawaiian Islands website and saw no reference to rainbows. it is possible your inclusion of them will fall flat with just about every non-hawaiian
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Re: Hawaii Map Ready for Feedback - BIG MAP

Postby Industrial Helix on Thu Dec 30, 2010 9:19 am

1) Post the small image please so I can have a gander.
2) That's fine and all, but your rainbows are oversaturated and pixelated and they look bad.

You need to describe what the canoes do as well somewhere in the legend.
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Re: Hawaii Map Ready for Feedback - edited

Postby esiemer on Thu Dec 30, 2010 1:29 pm

I think I finally posted the images the way I should have done when I started, sorry about that Industrial Helix. We are new at this, but figuring things out :)

We agree that the rainbows need to look better. We are working on it today. Any advice on how to make them? If we can't get them to look good we can abandon them for dotted lines or something. We are just trying to portray Hawaii's Aloha spirit, and hope those on the mainland will love it too.

I think we can all agree, though, that our rainbows look better than the ones the football team used to have on their helmets:

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Re: Hawaii Map Ready for Feedback - edited

Postby elGrande on Fri Dec 31, 2010 12:52 am

Is that a double rainbow? ;)
Looks good guys
The yellow text is a bit odd, but it's the right font for sure!
Maybe have the connection start out as rainbows then fade to a more bland color
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Re: Hawaii Map Ready for Feedback - edited

Postby saberty on Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:14 am

Nice reference elGrande.

We tried many different colors but did not find many that were readable while still preserving the Tiki feel.
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Re: Hawaii Map Ready for Feedback - edited

Postby Industrial Helix on Fri Dec 31, 2010 9:58 am

My advice on the rainbows is desaturate a lot and see how it looks... what program are you using?
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Re: Hawaii Map Ready for Feedback - edited

Postby saberty on Fri Dec 31, 2010 12:38 pm

We are using PhotoShop5
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Re: Hawaii Map Ready for Feedback - edited

Postby rdsrds2120 on Fri Dec 31, 2010 12:55 pm

You need a space between "each" and "other" in the legend. The troop circles do look a lot better :)
If you're going with a warming aloha hawaiian theme, why is the background so dark?

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Re: Hawaii Map Ready for Feedback - edited

Postby saberty on Fri Dec 31, 2010 1:03 pm

We went with an actual sat image of the Pacific around the islands. We think it gives a very Hawaiian feel just like the rich dark blue you see when you are there.

Working on the image edits now.
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