First Nations Americas.

[MarshalNey]

Alright, cool. Just wanted to make sure. My next comment would be that the Indies should have a label following the format of the others. It looks strange having a different font and no color splotch behind it.

I agree, as it took me a second to identify the "Indies 3" as the bonus. At least, with a color splotch it would look more like a bonus.

However that is really not gameplay clarity anymore, as it wasn't confusing, just a little off. So on to graphics I say!



Congratulations Tisha, it looks to be a worthy map of the new Supersize breed, indeed.

-- Marshal Ney

[rdsrds2120]

Yayyyy. One step for Tisha...one big step for CC.

-rd

[Tisha]

anything?

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[natty dread]

I'm not sure if my eyes are just deceiving me, but the land borders in the Indies inset look a bit thicker & sharper than the rest of the map... especially compared to N. Meso-America.

I'd also recommend moving the Chorotega label a bit to the right so that it won't need to be twisted - it looks nice and contributes to the page curl effect, but it makes the territory name kinda hard to read. Also, the Paya label could be moved down a bit, to separate it from the text in the Indies inset.

[Tisha]

I'm not sure if my eyes are just deceiving me, but the land borders in the Indies inset look a bit thicker & sharper than the rest of the map... especially compared to N. Meso-America.

I'd also recommend moving the Chorotega label a bit to the right so that it won't need to be twisted - it looks nice and contributes to the page curl effect, but it makes the territory name kinda hard to read. Also, the Paya label could be moved down a bit, to separate it from the text in the Indies inset.

their not thicker or sharper, maybe a bit darker of a color.

[natty dread]

their not thicker or sharper, maybe a bit darker of a color.

Well, a darker colour can make a line look thicker

[The Bison King]

I don't like the writing underneath Cuba. I find it distracting, I suggest removing it.

[isaiah40]

The paper that has the Indies on it, can you fix it so that it looks like it is "under" the south america paper. Right now it looks like it is on top and underneath all at the same time.

[Victor Sullivan]

The paper that has the Indies on it, can you fix it so that it looks like it is "under" the south america paper. Right now it looks like it is on top and underneath all at the same time.

Wait, what? How? It's just ripped is all...

[Ace Rimmer]

I'd also recommend moving the Chorotega label a bit to the right so that it won't need to be twisted - it looks nice and contributes to the page curl effect, but it makes the territory name kinda hard to read. Also, the Paya label could be moved down a bit, to separate it from the text in the Indies inset.

agree

The paper that has the Indies on it, can you fix it so that it looks like it is "under" the south america paper. Right now it looks like it is on top and underneath all at the same time.

disagree

I don't like the writing underneath Cuba. I find it distracting, I suggest removing it.

disagree

[MrBenn]

You should be able to make the papers look more like they're stacked by variegating the shadow slightly; the shadow should be slightly larger on the Northern map - something like this example... see how the shadow changes depending on which other 'layer' it's falling upon:

[brandoncfi]

Fantastic map can't wait to play

[Tisha]

-changed the Indies font, added more color behind it.
-lightened the letter on the Indies paper.. making it less bold
-lightened the borders on the Indies to make natty_dread shut up (:
-paper shadows like MrBenn
-moved the Nina Cariri route to the right a tiny bit.
-no gun or reins on the horse.

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[Victor Sullivan]

Fantastic. Just... fantastic... I love all edits, especially the lightening of that text on the Indies paper.

[natty dread]

Nice!

One small thing. Now that the North part doesn't have the title visible, I wonder if you should just remove it from the south part as well? I mean, some people might be confused seeing two titles on the map, but only one of them is the real title...