Flapcake wrote:Hi sempaispellcheck,
I havent visit your map in a while, I can se that you have been working with the theme alot
Now my 5 cents, what I think you need to start with is, get the border lines smooten out, also at "Bourse" the line overlapping in to "Temple"
What I meen with smooten out is that the thicker outerlines are to pixilated and rough, use the brush with feathers (1 or 2) the pensil are to hard and makes jagged lines.
Its not critique, its just if you smooten the lines you get a better view and a anchor point, you got nice colours and I like the picture, get some soul of Paris in there
Keep up the spirit.
ManBungalow wrote:Are the graphics like this just to get the gameplay sorted out or is this the visual direction you want to take ?
Winged Cat wrote:You say "hold all 5 stars", but I only count 4.
Winged Cat wrote: How do you cross the river?
Winged Cat wrote:Are the stars the landmarks? That needs to be made clearer.
sempaispellcheck wrote:ManBungalow wrote:Are the graphics like this just to get the gameplay sorted out or is this the visual direction you want to take ?
This is my first experience with any kind of graphics software. If you have any advice, tips, tricks, etc., please share, as I need all the help I can get, graphically speaking (though that's probably obvious).
swimmerdude99 wrote:Sorry to throw this out there if its already been said... but where is the 5th star? it says hold all 5 to win, I only see 4 :/
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