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Carte de la ville de Paris

Postby sempaispellcheck on Wed Sep 19, 2012 10:09 pm

Bonsoir à tout le monde!

Je suis en train de développer, pour CC, une carte de la ville de Paris, une des plus belles villes du monde (comme nous savons tous). :D

S'il vous plaît, cliquez ici pour voir la carte, et pour me dire comme c'est belle, comme c'est laide, et, bien sûr, comment je peux l'améliorer.

Toute critique sera appréciée!!

Merci bien!
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Re: Carte de la ville de Paris

Postby Gilles#1 on Thu Sep 20, 2012 6:30 am

Je trouve ta carte "Super belle", la seule suggestion serait de créer des impasses entre les territoires. Comme par example:
Montmartre & La Villette.

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Re: Carte de la ville de Paris

Postby sempaispellcheck on Thu Sep 20, 2012 7:52 am

Merci bien, Gilles!! C'est une très bonne suggestion.
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Re: Carte de la ville de Paris

Postby maxfaraday on Thu Sep 20, 2012 9:45 am

Pour le gameplay, ça m'a l'air OK, par contre l'esthetique je crois qu'il y a encore beaucoup de boulot à faire.
J'espère ne pas t'offenser mais ça ressemble à du travail baclé d'amateur, stp le prend pas mal j'essaye juste d'être honnête.
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Re: Carte de la ville de Paris

Postby sempaispellcheck on Thu Sep 20, 2012 1:21 pm

maxfaraday wrote:Pour le gameplay, ça m'a l'air OK, par contre l'esthetique je crois qu'il y a encore beaucoup de boulot à faire.
J'espère ne pas t'offenser mais ça ressemble à du travail baclé d'amateur, stp le prend pas mal j'essaye juste d'être honnête.

Oui, je sais bien qu'il y'en a beaucoup à faire - c'est ma première expérience des arts cartographiques. :D
N'aie pas peur de m'offenser - tu ne vas jamais y arriver, même si tu dis n'importe quoi - je sais que je ne sais rien, et je cherche vraiment l'honnêteté.
koontz1973 m'a offert beaucoup de conseils pour améliorer la carte, et je suis en train de les intégrer dans le dessin.
Mais si tu as des idées spécifiques que tu penses m'aideront, partage-les!

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Re: Carte de la ville de Paris

Postby DJoach on Wed Oct 03, 2012 8:25 am

Tu en as parlé à Pamoa ? Il pourrait t' être de bon conseil ;)
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Re: Carte de la ville de Paris

Postby sempaispellcheck on Wed Oct 03, 2012 8:36 am

Pas encore, mais comme tu le mentionne, je vais peut-être l'envoyer un MP quand j'ai fini la nouvelle version sur laquelle je travailles maintenant.

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Re: Carte de la ville de Paris

Postby sempaispellcheck on Tue Jan 01, 2013 4:07 pm

Pour fêter le Nouvel An, je vous présente la neuvième version de ma carte de Paris!
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Allez voir, et dites-moi ce que vous en pensez! :D

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Re: Carte de la ville de Paris

Postby Gilles#1 on Wed Jan 02, 2013 8:54 am

Un commentaire, à côté de Notre-Dame il y a une étoile, est-ce un territoire distinct. Si oui, alors il manque l'accès ainsi que le nom.
Pour le reste "bravo". ;)
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Re: Carte de la ville de Paris

Postby sempaispellcheck on Wed Jan 02, 2013 9:01 am

Gilles#1 wrote:Un commentaire, à côté de Notre-Dame il y a une étoile, est-ce un territoire distinct. Si oui, alors il manque l'accès ainsi que le nom.

Non, les deux îles font un seul territoire. Quand j'apprends comment le faire, je vais remplir l'espace à côté de l'étoile avec un déssin de la célèbre catédrale pour laquelle le territoire est nommé.

Gilles#1 wrote:Pour le reste "bravo". ;)

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