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[Vaction valid until August 2014] Stronghold

Postby ManBungalow on Tue Jun 25, 2013 11:25 am

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Map Name: Stronghold
Mapmaker(s): ManBungalow and the community
Number of Territories: 56
Special Features: Bombards, autodeploys, winning condition, starting neutrals
What Makes This Map Worthy of Being Made: idk

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Last edited by ManBungalow on Fri Jan 03, 2014 4:34 pm, edited 14 times in total.
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Re: GCCM Map Development thread - in need of a title

Postby koontz1973 on Tue Jun 25, 2013 11:26 am

First of, lets all congratulate Manbungalow on a superb win. =D> I have sent a PM to all of the other entrants asking them to hold of for one week before posting their maps in the drafting room. This will give ManB a good amount of time to get some great feedback from those who voted for him. He says he has some ideas on how to better his map already so lets have at it.

So, this is the time for you all in the community to make a good map, great. Any idea for this should not go unspoken. No idea is so outlandish that it has to be silenced. If you see a mistake, tell ManB. If you think your idea will make the map better, tell ManB. The aim now is to make the next great community map.

ManBungalow, here are the kickers, you now have the biggest job. I have done my bit with running this contest. It is now up to you to finish it of. This map is now considered part of the foundry proper and will be given no special treatment by any cartographer (this means you need to answer all community suggestions). We will assist you in any way we can though, but you have to ask for that help.


All prizes will be awarded upon completion of this map (some when you hit beta play, others upon quenching). If this map falls to the wayside (like Papua New Guinea), the second place map will be moved into winning place and you will of forfeited all prizes. This is to make sure that we get a map from this in the end.

Once again, well done ManBungalow. I look forward to see where you can take this.
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Re: GCCM Map Development thread - in need of a title

Postby koontz1973 on Tue Jun 25, 2013 11:28 am

OK, so lets now move this over to the community.

Here is my first big question. What is the name of this map ManB? Do you have any idea?
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Re: GCCM Map Development thread - in need of a title

Postby ManBungalow on Tue Jun 25, 2013 11:47 am

Thanks koontz.

Alrighty...
The premise is that there's a central battle for the Stronghold (which is really quite similar to Helms Deep in the Lord of the Rings, which ties up the high fantasy criterion nicely). This is. in fact, the struggle of three distinct armies battling for the stronghold.

The 888s you see on the image above just show which regions start neutral.

I've really gone for simplicity in this map. I want to make a map which everybody can understand. There are some maps out there which I'm terrified will come up if I start a 1-minute-round-speed-game, and I don't want this to be one of them.

I've been reading the public reactions to this map during the voting process.
Here is a brief to-do list:
Change the font of the region names
Probably rename some regions
Add detail to regions
Sorting out the rebel regions
Find a way to convey each bonus name

I've seen that many people don't like how the rebel regions work. To be honest, I don't either. I had difficulty getting the auto-deploy and bombardment features required by the GCCM voters into the gameplay structure. I'll think about this, and seriously review it.

Discussion focus:
Map name
Rebel regions (remember - bombardments and autodeploys must be on the map somewhere)
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More generally - graphics and gameplay
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Re: GCCM Map Development thread - in need of a title

Postby ManBungalow on Tue Jun 25, 2013 11:51 am

koontz1973 wrote:OK, so lets now move this over to the community.

Here is my first big question. What is the name of this map ManB? Do you have any idea?

I was thinking "Three Armies", or "Battle of Three Armies".

But I'd really like the community to suggest names for consideration.
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Re: GCCM Map Development thread - in need of a title

Postby Aleena on Tue Jun 25, 2013 12:07 pm

The goal is to capture the stronghold - so why not call it:

Stronghold

In fact if you wanted to make more graphic changes and completely change the story Though I do not know the story behind this battle any ways.....

I see the board has a stronghold guarded by 3 armies and in the cavern 4 sets of rebels..
I for some reason see this as a great layout for Robinhood...

Change cavern walls to tree tops (so your looking down onto sherwood forest.
The Stronghold - could be Nottingham
The 3 guards are the sherif's men
The 4 rebels are robinhood's men

Players can fight with robin hood's men until they are excepted into their ranks and there after be given their support of 2 new bandits to assist you each day.

Once you capture Nottingham it takes a full day to hold it (so that you find the sherif hiding in nottingham and end his plague on the people)

so a name if you go this route "Sherwood"

Though my second view is way off target and makes you change a lot - you might want to stick with "Stronghold"
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Re: GCCM Map Development thread - in need of a title

Postby dakky21 on Tue Jun 25, 2013 1:34 pm

On the Graphical part, you say "Mountains and water are impassable". Does that mean that river which enters the sea is also impassable? So no way from lower part of map to the upper part of map, only through Stronghold?
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Re: GCCM Map Development thread - in need of a title

Postby ManBungalow on Tue Jun 25, 2013 3:46 pm

dakky21 wrote:On the Graphical part, you say "Mountains and water are impassable". Does that mean that river which enters the sea is also impassable? So no way from lower part of map to the upper part of map, only through Stronghold?

Yes, this is correct. It's partly a deliberate thing to funnel the activity to the three army regions.

I sort of had in mind for that top-right corner something like a wing in Supermax, where it's hugely advantageous to clear enemies out of it completely. Looking at it now, it would benefit from having a bridge between New Headland and Tantamount or similar.

I feel that I shall also redo the river because it's dangerously thin at some points.
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Re: GCCM Map Development thread - in need of a title

Postby waauw on Tue Jun 25, 2013 4:50 pm

ManBungalow wrote:
dakky21 wrote:On the Graphical part, you say "Mountains and water are impassable". Does that mean that river which enters the sea is also impassable? So no way from lower part of map to the upper part of map, only through Stronghold?

Yes, this is correct. It's partly a deliberate thing to funnel the activity to the three army regions.

I sort of had in mind for that top-right corner something like a wing in Supermax, where it's hugely advantageous to clear enemies out of it completely. Looking at it now, it would benefit from having a bridge between New Headland and Tantamount or similar.

I feel that I shall also redo the river because it's dangerously thin at some points.


If you could change the colour of the river too so it looks a bit different from the borders, that be nice too. I didn't even notice there was a river :shock:

Anyway, for a mapname why don't you just give it a fantasy name(made up castle/kingdom name) or just make some variation with the either the word rebel or stronghold in it.
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Re: GCCM Map Development thread - in need of a title

Postby ManBungalow on Wed Jun 26, 2013 7:40 am

I'll call it Stronghold for now...partly just for the look of it when nobodies posts a headline.
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Re: GCCM Map Development thread - Stronghold

Postby koontz1973 on Thu Jun 27, 2013 8:08 am

ManB, I still have the GCCM PM list, so if you have anything that you need the community to decide (like a name for the map), you can set up a poll and I will PM the list with the question.
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Re: GCCM Map Development thread - Stronghold

Postby RjBeals on Thu Jun 27, 2013 9:31 am

Congrats MB on the win!

Couple of things:

I like the natual colors of this map, but initially, it doesn't look like a map. I know it's a rough draft, but those patches of "mountains?" need some work.

You already mention changing fonts - thats good.

Changing the water/river colors would help.

The stronghold is nice - I would almost say really make that a focal point with some good detail, move those mountains off it a bit.

At first I didn't like how the borders didn't touch any edges, but it will work. All region borders are obvious. Any reason for the smooth vector lines instead of jagged borders? Just wondering.

Looking forward to some updates. I don't have any suggestions for a name.
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Re: GCCM Map Development thread - Stronghold

Postby Dukasaur on Fri Jun 28, 2013 8:33 pm

Personally, I like the font.
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Re: GCCM Map Development thread - Stronghold

Postby koontz1973 on Fri Jun 28, 2013 11:45 pm

Manb, How about Stronghold for the title?

With the font, not really fantasy type is it but I can live with it as it is now with a clean up of the kerning.
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Re: GCCM Map Development thread - Stronghold

Postby dolomite13 on Sat Jun 29, 2013 11:06 am

Love the basics of this map.

The graphics however, as they are, are a great draft. But need a lot of work to make it worthy of live play. I would actually suggest scrapping all of he graphics and starting from scratch with colors for each "continent", water that is blue, and mountains that look more like mountains.

I look forward to seeing where this map goes.

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