Ok, just spent several hours working on this so I hope you like the adjustments.
your territory borders are a bit too faded at some places. I'd suggest making the borders stronger and easier to see.
Done. Borders strengthened.
Maybe make Dalmus a bit larger? It's rather small, blends into the background, and is partially obscured by the city icon.
I didn't make it larger but I moved the city to the side and made it's border more clear as well.
I don't think you should have Dalmus be a city. It would be more interesting if Chunjaris and Theraland could attack each other as well as Dalmus. Makes it less of a funnel.
Sorry man, should have mentioned that back at gamplay we're passed that now.
I think some of the castles could be smaller such as Thessisamess, Hellengarm, and Northern Frontier. Northern Frontier being the same size as Denmarn is the size difference I'm thinking.
Done. Thessisamess, Hellengar, and Northern Frontier city icons all made smaller.
- I would bring the border of Alus a bit to the south, also give Illania a bit more space, you have some space in Morovia.
- azuran could use some space too, maybe move the border a bit to the south
Done. Extended the borders on those, especially Azuran.
make that the border Aliskar Plain don't cross the text
Done. Moved the text up
could you make those bonuses in the right more like those bonuses in the left, with a frame and some colors.
I have no idea what you mean by this?
I think, maybe a bit later, you will need an easier font for the legend. I don't think you can make it look all good on the small map
especially take a good look at all those legends beneath, you'll need to make that look a bit cleaner, i think.
Done. I changed the font to be more readable, however I don't think it looks as cool.
small thing; I find the signature a bit distinctive, maybe a bit too much. I would replace the black in it to a more grey, like the color of the castles.
I think that would make it too hard to see, the castles are only grayish because I applied a transparency.
I wish you all the best and looking forward to play on it!
Duh. Thank you. Me too.
Also I am aware that the small version doesn't have counters on it yet. I had to remake the image from the original one, I'm tired and I'll do it tomorrow.
Oh... I also just noticed I some how lost the word "total" on the large image I'll get that tomorrow as well.