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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, new railway, page 20, Jun 25 2012

PostPosted: Wed Jun 27, 2012 2:09 am
by Oneyed
thanks Andy and RedBaron. I know that map has some graphics mistakes, but the main problem is gameplay now. my bad I answered wrong question:
what is needed to solve is connection between towns and bonuses.

about flag. in previuos vesion there was coat of arms. maybe I could add it back...

Oneyed

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, new railway, page 20, Jun 25 2012

PostPosted: Wed Jun 27, 2012 11:09 am
by RedBaron0
The map has a simpler feel then a detailed coat of arms would likely add. Keep that in mind.

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, new railway, page 20, Jun 25 2012

PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 2012 3:41 am
by Oneyed
updated version with some changes and with coat of arms.

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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, updated with coat of arms, Jun 28

PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 2012 4:31 am
by koontz1973
Is that not the coat of arms for Czechoslovakia. Would it not be better to use the two for both regions as your title is the Fragmentation of this region.
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Since you first posted this map, I have always felt it should be on a classroom wall so here is an idea for you. Extend the top of the image where you have the title now and on both sides, fill it with the different coats of arms for each part (Slovak & Czech) and then put the flags for each kraj along side if you have the room, if not, you could always put all of them along the bottom.


Can you explain this for me. kraj, krajov, kraje. I know one is singular, one is plural, but what about the third one?

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, updated with coat of arms, Jun 28

PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 2012 7:19 am
by Dukasaur
koontz1973 wrote:
Can you explain this for me. kraj, krajov, kraje. I know one is singular, one is plural, but what about the third one?

Kraj is singular, Kraje is the plural in Czech and Krajov is the plural in Slovak. (I believe. My grammar is weak.)

Map looking great, Oneyed!

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, updated with coat of arms, Jun 28

PostPosted: Thu Jun 28, 2012 10:23 am
by Oneyed
koontz1973 wrote:Is that not the coat of arms for Czechoslovakia. Would it not be better to use the two for both regions as your title is the Fragmentation of this region.


coat of arms used by me is for Fedral republic. and yes it is about fragmentation, but it is still one country. the history of fragmentation is not so simple, that somebody told lets didvide it and it was done. during year 1992 prime ministers of Czech republic and Slovak republic also with their goverments divided Czechoslovakia. it was not simple: there was common army (with tanks, airplanes, weapons...), common gold reserve, common debts and so on. so after their found solution their declared that official fragmentation will be in 1. 1. 1993.
koontz1973 wrote:Since you first posted this map, I have always felt it should be on a classroom wall so here is an idea for you. Extend the top of the image where you have the title now and on both sides,


you have good feeling :) . and therefore it would be board map (in school or wherever), there are these "empty" spaces.
koontz1973 wrote:fill it with the different coats of arms for each part (Slovak & Czech) and then put the flags for each kraj along side if you have the room, if not, you could always put all of them along the bottom.


I think with two coat of arms or two flags the map will be too replete.
Dukasaur wrote:
koontz1973 wrote:
Can you explain this for me. kraj, krajov, kraje. I know one is singular, one is plural, but what about the third one?

Kraj is singular, Kraje is the plural in Czech and Krajov is the plural in Slovak. (I believe. My grammar is weak.)


Kraj is singular in both languages. plural: 2, 3, 4 Kraje in both languages, 5, 6, 7 ... Krajov in Slovak language, 5, 6, 7 ... Krajů in Czech language.
Dukasaur wrote:Map looking great, Oneyed!


thanks. how much percentage map has because Beroun :lol:

Oneyed

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, updated with coat of arms, Jun 28

PostPosted: Sat Jun 30, 2012 8:09 pm
by isaiah40
I think the coat of arms is enough on the map. Too much more and it will get cluttered. Right now it looks good, but I'll go over it with my comb later. ;)

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, updated with coat of arms, Jun 28

PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 10:11 am
by AndyDufresne
isaiah40 wrote:I think the coat of arms is enough on the map. Too much more and it will get cluttered.

I echo this.

Keep on truckin' along.


--Andy

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, updated with coat of arms, Jun 28

PostPosted: Mon Jul 02, 2012 11:36 am
by koontz1973
Can we get the Y for Hungary with the rest of the word please.

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, updated with coat of arms, Jun 28

PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 1:31 am
by Oneyed
koontz1973 wrote:Can we get the Y for Hungary with the rest of the word please.


here are two versions:
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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, updated with coat of arms, July 0

PostPosted: Tue Jul 03, 2012 3:52 am
by koontz1973
Second one please.

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, updated with coat of arms, July 0

PostPosted: Wed Jul 04, 2012 6:46 pm
by Dukasaur
Minor point of English grammar:
"region and 3 towns inside its border" and "region and 2 towns inside its border"

These should be "its" not "it's" -- the possessive "its" not the contraction "it's=it is".

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, updated with coat of arms, July 0

PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 9:21 am
by Oneyed
koontz1973 wrote:Second one please.


I more like the first one. could we have more opinions here?

Oneyed

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, updated with coat of arms, July 0

PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 9:27 am
by koontz1973
Oneyed wrote:
koontz1973 wrote:Second one please.


I more like the first one. could we have more opinions here?

Oneyed

OK, second one please, my multiple personalities voted on it and they all say the second one. :mrgreen:

The reason is, Austria and Poland are one word, Germany is split up into two but of equal amounts. Only Hungary has the large difference. Looks odd to have two countries called Hunga and Ry. ;)

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, updated with coat of arms, July 0

PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 4:47 pm
by Dukasaur
koontz1973 wrote:
Oneyed wrote:
koontz1973 wrote:Second one please.


I more like the first one. could we have more opinions here?

Oneyed

OK, second one please, my multiple personalities voted on it and they all say the second one. :mrgreen:

The reason is, Austria and Poland are one word, Germany is split up into two but of equal amounts. Only Hungary has the large difference. Looks odd to have two countries called Hunga and Ry. ;)

Yeah, the stranded "RY" on the first version does not look good. The second version flows much better.

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, need opinions, page 21, July 03

PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2012 12:18 pm
by koontz1973
The second one looks a little squashed, so a slightly different angle will also allow it to space out some.

Vienna needs to be renamed Wean.

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, need opinions, page 21, July 03

PostPosted: Sat Jul 07, 2012 2:39 pm
by Oneyed
koontz1973 wrote:The second one looks a little squashed, so a slightly different angle will also allow it to space out some.


yes, but this is with hostile page problem. this is the same picture as number 1.
koontz1973 wrote:Vienna needs to be renamed Wean.


Wien.

ok, lets go with number 2. what next?

Oneyed

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, need opinions, page 21, July 03

PostPosted: Sun Jul 08, 2012 2:27 am
by Jippd
Agree version 2 looks better with the word all together

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, need opinions, page 21, July 03

PostPosted: Thu Jul 12, 2012 2:02 pm
by Oneyed
I did some small graphics changes and also small version. so lets move with this :)

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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, lets move, Jul 12

PostPosted: Fri Jul 13, 2012 10:54 pm
by Pirlo
love it.. nice work!

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, lets move, Jul 12

PostPosted: Sat Jul 14, 2012 1:53 am
by Oneyed
Pirlo wrote:love it.. nice work!


thanks. :)

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, lets move, Jul 12

PostPosted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 5:57 am
by pamoa
your last update is only a black image for me ?

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, lets move, Jul 12

PostPosted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 7:32 am
by koontz1973
pamoa wrote:your last update is only a black image for me ?

A lot of maps hae been blacked out.

Read this for the answer.
viewtopic.php?f=127&t=174607

Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, more suggestions?, Jul 22

PostPosted: Sun Jul 22, 2012 4:39 pm
by Oneyed
any more suggestions what is needed to do here?

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Re: Fragmentation of CSFR, more suggestions?, Jul 22

PostPosted: Sun Jul 29, 2012 5:33 pm
by Nola_Lifer
You need to spice it up a bit. Maybe work on borders of the map and legend. Maybe use a different type of txt. Cool map. It just needs to spice. ;)

Edit: Also, maybe brighter colors. Shade the border areas and make other areas lighter to give it a more 3D effect than just the flat surface.