Version 6:
Changes apart from comments below:
1. Widened passageway for E Po.
2. moved eastern and western walls out to give eunuchs more room
3. moved the Emperors to centre them
4. added text to poa description
5. moved northern gate names
6. background colour change to legend
6. background change to map - now yellow
TaCktiX wrote:A few grammar corrections:
- You typoed E. Pao, putting E. Poa instead
- On the left when referring to the emperor attack routes, you say mendian instead of median
yes that is Meridian, i think i've fixed the kerning on that but let me know if it's still unclear.
Also, I'm not sure on the attack routes on the outer bonuses. Is it only the immediate adjacent territory, or every single one that it connects to? The solid un-ending lines confuse me.
these should be more clear now as i have double the line edges where these join, but i will be targeting these joins for special graphics, so watch this aspect.
Sir. Ricco wrote:Gates and the Tower bonuses I think are fine. Each one can be attacked so I think you did a good job on those.
Good
I think the gradens (If there are only two, I have a hard time telling) should be knocked down to 1 or 2.
gardens should be fixed now. the garden bonus i'd like to keep at 3 as there are some 5 significant borders there in the IMperial Garden not to mention the 2 on West Garden
All the other bonuses look good to me. I like the way its going. Keep up the Good Work.
Thanks
I just have a problem.
The colors in the Legends and hard to match up with the colors on the Map.
And Priests 1 is the wrong color but I am sure you saw that.
Should be better now, but no i didn't notice, thanks for the pickup.
qwert wrote:...
1.Font OK,but i notice that its to light text,can you put to be more darken,like K Tang Army.
3.Hmm,again text need to be darken.
Abouth Bonuses,well mine policy is to not mess in maker decision for bonuses,after all you will better know what is best for map.I belive that you have some formula for creating bonuses value,so aim ok with that.
Thanks for comment qwert. I think those things are fix now, yes?