Conquer Club

Version 3:


What i fixed:
-darkened the green letters a little bit
-split the closets, so that instead of two, there are now 4
-new chair!

Version 2:


What i fixed:
-changed the word "Bonuses" from red to white and enlarged it
-changed the word "Classtime!" from blue to red, enlarged it, and moved it

----Original Post----
So here is the map that i have so far:


and here it is showing the attack routes (this will not be part of the map, just i havent irgured out a good way to put it on the real map):


here is the original idea from me (i took a break on it and im back with a better map):
Click Here to see original.

Discuss!

the red blurry part says "bonuses"


i will fix that.

i like it, but the attack lines look bad,

bryguy wrote:i like it, but the attack lines look bad,

i know, i wont be using those. those are just to show how the attacking system works. the first map is the one you should be looking at more.

thanks bryguy, glad you like it.

I'm happy that 3 votes say they like it and 0 say they dont, but i really need some constructive criticism, please. Really, anything you dont like, and ill change it.

the_fatty

Ok, im working on the teacher's chair (i dont like the way it looks). that will be in my next update.

The line about the pimp bonus is unclear. Do you get a +1 for holding any girl and Jeff, or just the ones surrounding him that you listed?

InkL0sed wrote:The line about the pimp bonus is unclear. Do you get a +1 for holding any girl and Jeff, or just the ones surrounding him that you listed?

it says in there that it is only the girls adjacent to him (aka the girls listed).

Nice update...Though you might want to use the "Granite 1" pattern for the floor.

Unit_2 wrote:Nice update...Though you might want to use the "Granite 1" pattern for the floor.

Granite #1 seems kinda dark to me. tis almost all black, except for the white streaks.

Why does it have The Fatty sig? did he say you could use his idea or you just taking over? just thought it was.... interesting...

Top Dog wrote:Why does it have The Fatty sig? did he say you could use his idea or you just taking over? just thought it was.... interesting...

what do you mean, The Fatty sig?

UPDATE!

I looks very sloppy. Try to just draw everything yourself.

Kaplowitz wrote:I looks very sloppy. Try to just draw everything yourself.

you mean sloppy as in very pixelated? if yea, they i agree. but drawing everything by myself would be sloppy as well, due to my poor artistic abilities

oh, you changed your avatar I thought you were someone else taking fatty's idea I didn't read your name just saw the av.

Top Dog wrote:oh, you changed your avatar I thought you were someone else taking fatty's idea I didn't read your name just saw the av.

oh, lol

I don't know but the graphics just aren't clicking for me.

seems pretty much like the other map to me


sorry I just don't see why this is fun. It's just a bunch of territories that connect in the middle with a few on the outside.

I don't see any appeal at all

r u gonna put peoples names in if it gets approved? Yes? No? but then what are the chances this will ever get approved! JK

Hi,

I love the idea for this map. I've spent plenty of time in a classroom for sure.

Anyway, you could possibly change the flooring to look like tile. The lines of the floor could run from desk to desk indicating the attack lines. Most schools have the square tile flooring.

Keep up the good work!

Laci

edbeard wrote:seems pretty much like the other map to me


sorry I just don't see why this is fun. It's just a bunch of territories that connect in the middle with a few on the outside.

I don't see any appeal at all

Sorry for the duel posts.

I agree that the block formation is a little bland. If you wanted to move to an elementary style room, you could have the desks in a horseshoe shape or in groups. You could also add a reading nook in corner. My main thought is that you should really cheese it up with brighter colors, ABCs, apple on the desk, etc. These details will spur the fun attack/defend positions.

LMR

laci_mae wrote:

edbeard wrote:seems pretty much like the other map to me


sorry I just don't see why this is fun. It's just a bunch of territories that connect in the middle with a few on the outside.

I don't see any appeal at all

Sorry for the duel posts.

I agree that the block formation is a little bland. If you wanted to move to an elementary style room, you could have the desks in a horseshoe shape or in groups. You could also add a reading nook in corner. My main thought is that you should really cheese it up with brighter colors, ABCs, apple on the desk, etc. These details will spur the fun attack/defend positions.

LMR

do you mean to have these items be terits or just to make the graphics nice?

Yeah, I remember in gradeschool we always had groups of four...

Like not all facing the teacher...

A reading area and desks grouped or arranged differently would make good territories. You could maybe use the other stuff just to brighten the room.

Maybe a bonus could be the 4 students that brought an apple for the teacher or that were ready for class (had their notebooks and pencils out). You might add a dunce seat & cap or a naughty stool.

I think the inspiration will come with an updated desk layout.