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Dukasaur wrote:Quoting is not your forte, apparently.

JdeV 100 wrote:

Dukasaur wrote:Quoting is not your forte, apparently.

Am I doing this correctly? Which quote were you talking about?

there u go this b the werse

in this one) storm
storms in california have caused fatalities and state-wide chaos but might also have relieved months of drought
storms in california might have relieved months of drought but have also caused fatalities and state-wide chaos
ipso facto everyone know/s u r the resurrection)
in california there were storms
there r

JdeV 100 wrote:I don't see an attribution for your quote. What's the quotation part of my poem?

Dead Kennedys wrote:Right Guard Will Not Help You Here.

Dukasaur wrote:Quoting is not your forte, apparently.

jimboston wrote:There’s no indication that what was written was a poem.

At least we can all agree on…
Postby jimboston on Tue Dec 28, 2021 9:11 am

There’s no indication that what was written was a poem.

JdeV 100 wrote:But you might have all been more familiar than that with Philip Larkin's This Be The Verse and recognised something of the style of ee cummings in my layout, and since you couldn't make sense of it as prose, I am taking the lame feedback as a culture fail for the forum. There is also some evidence from my earlier posts that I can quote and I'm not that illiterate. It's a very good poem in my book, I just thought it might have been nice to try it on you here, since I'm locked down. Ah, well.

JdeV 100 wrote:Alright, thank you for the confirmation about your enjoyment of cummings, and the time you took to provide a critique. Sweet of you.

Happy New Year!

JdeV 100 wrote:But you might have all been more familiar than that with Philip Larkin's This Be The Verse and recognised something of the style of ee cummings in my layout, and since you couldn't make sense of it as prose, I am taking the lame feedback as a culture fail for the forum. There is also some evidence from my earlier posts that I can quote and I'm not that illiterate. It's a very good poem in my book, I just thought it might have been nice to try it on you here, since I'm locked down. Ah, well.

jusplay4fun wrote:I read about Philip Larkin; he was a very good poet.

His relationship with women was far more interesting

I know a bit about ee cummings and enjoy his poems. I do not recognize nor enjoy what you claim is your poetry.

I still think that if you had initially identified your post as poetry, it may have gotten a better reception here in this Forum thread. There is irony that you posted your poetry in the thread called: "At least we can all agree on…"

JdeV 100 wrote:

jusplay4fun wrote:I read about Philip Larkin; he was a very good poet.

His relationship with women was far more interesting

I know a bit about ee cummings and enjoy his poems. I do not recognize nor enjoy what you claim is your poetry.

I still think that if you had initially identified your post as poetry, it may have gotten a better reception here in this Forum thread. There is irony that you posted your poetry in the thread called: "At least we can all agree on…"

Now that you know it is poetry, feel free to comment on it. The days when we were unclear if it was poetry are gone. If I am not an idiot, the irony is not one for you to declare; it is your becoming the subject.

December 30, 21 Home

I speak, for I am God who created all that exists.

I understand many things, many think I am old and old fashion to think why the way things are. There is a lack of me the one true God in people's lives. I am given no credit for life today. Many think life is something you throw away. Life is precious and fragile and should not be taken for granted. One's life is very valuable in the eyes of God. One’s life should be just as valuable to the person. Every person was created in the image and likeness of God Himself. How special is that! Knowing I thought so much of a person to create that person. Lo, I am God the Creator and maker of life that exist. You are fearfully and wonderfully made in the eyes of God Himself.


Go now.
For I am God.

JdeV 100 wrote:Christmas storms hit California with much-needed snow and rain
Two dead in submerged car as major Christmas storm hits California

(there u go this b the werse

in this one) storm
storms in california have caused fatalities and state-wide chaos but might also have relieved months of drought
storms in california might have relieved months of drought but have also caused fatalities and state-wide chaos
ipso facto everyone know/s u r the resurrection)
in california there were storms
there r