Labyrinth [Quenched]

[koontz1973]

Slaves Entrance (should be Slave Entrances, since it's used in the singular in the description of the conditional border)
Medusa's Gaze (apostrophe needs to be added)
Dead Warriors

Both words are capitalized in these instances because they are proper nouns. Shouldn't Ring of Fire be the same way? And while you're at it, might as well change Siren call to Siren's Call.

All done.

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These are simple changes for you to make real quick.

No such thing as a quick simple change.

Wish list:
1) swords crisper
2) white gone from ring of fire
3) beta!

Not to worry. As soon as the GP stamp is given, these are top priority along with about a million other things.

[nolefan5311]

Slaves Entrance (should be Slave Entrances, since it's used in the singular in the description of the conditional border)
Medusa's Gaze (apostrophe needs to be added)
Dead Warriors

Both words are capitalized in these instances because they are proper nouns. Shouldn't Ring of Fire be the same way? And while you're at it, might as well change Siren call to Siren's Call.

All done.

Well, not really, but I suppose if you're happy with it...

[nolefan5311]

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[koontz1973]

Slaves Entrance (should be Slave Entrances, since it's used in the singular in the description of the conditional border)
Medusa's Gaze (apostrophe needs to be added)
Dead Warriors

Both words are capitalized in these instances because they are proper nouns. Shouldn't Ring of Fire be the same way? And while you're at it, might as well change Siren call to Siren's Call.

All done.

Well, not really, but I suppose if you're happy with it...

What did I miss? Thought I got it all.

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[koontz1973]

Nole, what did I miss with the game play wording?

Wish list:
1) swords crisper
2) white gone from ring of fire
3) beta!

1) Done
2) Done
3) Not there yet.

Gone round and cleaned up the image. Legend is now aligned. Not perfect as that is not wanted.

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Can I ask the mods to let me know what they like and dislike so I am not flapping around later trying to please them.

[koontz1973]

Glow versus icons.
Top image has the glows for the killer neutrals (Medusa) and the target squares for the spears.
The bottom has some icons for the same ones.

Which one is better? Glow or icons.

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[IcePack]

1) Done - looks great
2) Done - I'm still let peevin', the white on the inside of the ring still driving me crazy

[koontz1973]

Thats not white, it is a slight grey which is why I missed it. Will fix now.

[nolefan5311]

Hmm...I can't really tell what the icons are meant to represent. I mean, I know because I know the map, but if I was looking at it for the first time I wouldn't really have a clue.

[koontz1973]

Hmm...I can't really tell what the icons are meant to represent. I mean, I know because I know the map, but if I was looking at it for the first time I wouldn't really have a clue.

But if the icon was in the legend so you would have a reference to it, I just do not want to get further down the line and have someone ask for the icons over the glows. cairnswk is famous for icons after Stalingrad and flapcake put them on trench warfair. I just do not want to over look any possibility if you know what I mean.

[IcePack]

You've started / kept the glow theme, I would strongly prefer keeping those areas glow over adding additional icons.

[koontz1973]

That was and is my inclination.

EDIT: Got rid of the icons, updated legend, removed light grey from fire rings, added a darker glow to the sirens as the blue was too hard to see over the sea.

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[AndyDufresne]

You've started / kept the glow theme, I would strongly prefer keeping those areas glow over adding additional icons.

Glow all the way. This map already has a plethora of icons and other objects, that more icons I think would just distract more.


--Andy

[koontz1973]

Icon and glow time then.

Icons in use at the moment.

Medusa
Minotaur
Dead Warriors (4 territs per bonus)
Spears
Food
Swords
Ring of fire
Pegasus
Prometheus
Traps
Siren
Pegasus

Change any? Increase/decrease size of any? Move any to a different part of the territ?

Glows

Black for siren decay
White and Yellow for Spear targets
Blue for Medusa killer territs

Colours are OK now for colour blind tests.
But are they OK for normal people (Like/dislike colour)?
Too small or too large?

[isaiah40]

The food icons are a little hard to see on the map. Can you enlarge them and place the 888's in those squares? You may have to move the icons to a different corner, to get the 888's to fit with the enlarged icons.

[IcePack]

I do not like black decay glow. Keep original

[koontz1973]

Food increased by 4 pixels and placed onto the left bottom of territ.
Siren glow now a purple. Black not liked but cannot go back to the original as it does not show up on one of the colour blind tests.

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and with the 888s on to show placement.

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[IcePack]

Uh.... Go back to the black. No offense but the glow ruins the siren. I wish you didn't have to add anything to that.

[koontz1973]

Uh.... Go back to the black. No offense but the glow ruins the siren. I wish you didn't have to add anything to that.

Darker blue with a higher contrast can be seen by all. Also, blue over the water seems to fit the colour scheme.
Changed Pegasus and added a reduced glow.

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[IcePack]

That looks..... Better. What's the food supposed to represent? It kinda looks like a small Pokemon and a McDonald's sausage patty

[koontz1973]

Olives and a goblet of wine.

[IcePack]

Olives and a goblet of wine.

I see the goblet now that you've pointed it out. Olives aret very clear. How about grapes?

[AndyDufresne]

I actually thought it looked more like a block of cheese and a hamburger.


--Andy

[Nola_Lifer]

Pretty sweet map. The only thing that comes to mind is the background of the legend. I think the red takes away from the icons. Maybe a darker color would be better?

[koontz1973]

What's the food supposed to represent? It kinda looks like a small Pokemon and a McDonald's sausage patty

How about grapes?

I actually thought it looked more like a block of cheese and a hamburger.


--Andy

Always with the jokes.
Not done for all. Just look at column 3.
A3-same icon but with a slight glow.
E3-same icon but olives are now green.
J3-increased the contrast to the same icon.
N3-new icon. Goblet with meat.
Choose one or none and can get the rest done.

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Pretty sweet map. The only thing that comes to mind is the background of the legend. I think the red takes away from the icons. Maybe a darker color would be better?

The legend is next on the list of things to do. And this should be the last part of the puzzle before the small can be made up.