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cairnswk wrote:Hello Dub Warrior...i'm here for a preliminary review please forgive if some things have already been discussed and edited.
This is a nice small map in some colour combinations that haven't been seen before... turning out well. I like the citrus colours you've applied, your border design is suitable and periodic, and in particular the curve you have around the title.
For an older person like me, i'd like to see the very small territory names slightly larger in font size.
The overall size on version 6 will still have to be reduced to 630px width, as it stands now at 668px.
"french" king in story needs a capital F.
Some rivers around Brugge are a bit pixely.
Perhaps the inset legend map can be reduced slightly in size also to give the sea line some real estate.
You've got a four-way border around Axel, Hulst, Lokeren, Beveren that will need amending. And the same at Doornik, Hergen etc...they simply need to be offset a little.
The territory borders will need tidying slightly, some lines are thicker than others, and one of then doesn't intersect properly....the border of Eeklo just north-west of Brugge.
But overall, coming along nicely.
whitestazn88 wrote:...
older person? i thought you were in uni?
cairnswk wrote:whitestazn88 wrote:...
older person? i thought you were in uni?
I am in uni. i worked for 34 years after high school and am now a "mature-age student" at James Cook Univeristy here in Cairns.
60 % of the uni's popluation are mature-aged students.
Oldies go to uni here in australia also whitestazn88.
Now back to topic...
cairnswk wrote:"french" king in story needs a capital F.
lt_oddball wrote:Was Antwerpen then still part of Brabant ?
DubWarrior wrote:Thanks so far, but more comments are neccesary.
Grtz
DubWarrior
lt_oddball wrote:DubWarrior wrote:Thanks so far, but more comments are neccesary.
Grtz
DubWarrior
ok... waiting for more opinions
DubWarrior wrote:I used the CC_MAP_BONUS_CALC.xls file.
It comes up with some suprising changes for the bonus.
The results of it are:
Bonus for:
Duinkerke:+2
Artesie:+5
Kroonvlaanderen: +10 (!)
Rijksvlaanderen: +3
Henegouwen: +4
Vier ambachten: +3
Brabant:+3
Kortrijk: +5
Oostervan: +4
some professional advice would be welcome here...do I need to make these changes on the map?
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