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Joodoo wrote:=D>
great start...
foregone wrote:I really hate that its so damn easy for you. Sigh.
The map is exceptionally pretty. But since I feel forced to make some form of criticism (only possibly constructive) the bubble thing is strange. Looks fine on the left but is it absolutely necessary for it to be bubbled on the top right as well? I personally think it might look better without it.
InkL0sed wrote:Um. Quench?
Seriously, I can't find anything else to say...
ZeakCytho wrote:The map area feels way too small to me. Could you enlarge it and cut away from the legend area a bit?
whitestazn88 wrote:the title is readable, but not very good looking in my opinion... the background is really dense, and it's making it hard to read the legend areas
will get back to you on gameplay shortly
RjBeals wrote:good start carins, and pretty unique looking map.
1) are your plans to keep the map graphics simple / vector looking? My vote is yes. The map looks small and could be a little cramped. I would suggest keeping the map simple, and the surrounding graphics dressed up.
2) The Vilayet "V" territories could stand out a little more since they do form a bonus region. I mean I can see them because of the V, and the slightly different color shade - but it's kind of hard to differentiate between them on my monitor. I also think you don't need the "V" and the "V is a Viayent" blurb in the legend - just use a more distinguishable color.
3) Is there a way you would split up the light green Anatolia into 2 smaller bonus regions? It's an enormous region right now that I don't think anyone has a chance of holding for the +8 bonus.
4) I think the metal plaques that the legend is on could be a little better. I like the idea, but could use a little refinement.
5) I don't care for the title. Looks like you just picked a font and added a big outer bevel.
6) The circle that holds the actual map bothers me. I know it's egg shaped because of the regions included on the map, but I would prefer a little symmetry.
Buttt... excellent first draft (as usual).
Paddy The Cat wrote:just want to say keep working on this one cairns! youre maps always coem out amazing, and this one is looking good, except that maybe the territory area are cramped
qwert wrote:Turkey look crampy,but yours dimension is 550px,so these mean that you can create to be bigger(80px extra free).
I must say that these is complete diferent then mine Europe 1914.
whitestazn88 wrote:i think a couple of others may have said this, but anatolia could be made smaller, its much too big a continent to try to hold especially with all the smaller ones
and the two greens you're using are too similar in my opinion
I'm in the process of working on that now Qwert.
And of course it's going to be different...we're too different cartographers, but that's why i chose Asian minor and Africa for my WWI maps, so you could have Europe.
qwert wrote:I'm in the process of working on that now Qwert.
And of course it's going to be different...we're too different cartographers, but that's why i chose Asian minor and Africa for my WWI maps, so you could have Europe.
Thank you so much,i belive that people will learn something from these part of WWI.
whitestazn88 wrote:i like it
the east anatolia color could be changed a little more, its still pretty similar to the other bonus...
the title looks good
legend could use some reworking, the names of the continents look too light on that very shiny silverish background... maybe a darker border around those letters or just darken the letters overall.
i am still not a fan of the background color, but ultimately i could live with it
the playable area is a bit tight, and i think you could shave off like 4 or 5 pixels off of the left side of the map, push british egypt's name and circle a little right, then stretch out the right some more to give it more room. if you don't understand, just say and maybe i can explain it a little better
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