For a first draft, it is interesting.
But here are a few simple things you can do to make it a whole lot better.
Go and learn GIMP. Follow nattys guides, and here are a few places that you can visit.http://www.cgtextures.com/
This guy is good. Has lots of videos.http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E84BNlYvcNk&feature=related
Your territ breakup is good.
Fill the bonus zones in with solid colour for now as I cannot tell what is what.
GP looks pretty much organised now so that can be left alone till a lot later.
Images need to be royalty free. So you need to prove the ones you have are. But does a pirate fit this map?
Never use the pencil.
GH, this map is going into the drafting room as it meets the criteria. [Moved
The more you post new drafts, the more you will get in the way of feedback. Do not wait for it as it may not come. Keep practising and keep posting improved drafts. Until it is good enough, it stays in the drafting room.