oaktown wrote:alright, for the last time clean up your grammar and I may give this my stamp.
• are you going to capitalize "Landing Point" or aren't you? you have "Landing Points" and "landing points" and even "landing Points" !!!!
• "bombard any other territory within their colony" - elsewhere you call it an empire, so I'd change colony to empire.
• "Only ports on the same ocean" etc... drop "only." Because neighboring territories can attack them as well.
Hang around ill have it done asap.