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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-7- 12 dec

Postby Qwert on Sat Dec 13, 2008 12:58 pm

Draft already? Wow!

I think you could use a symbol for autodeploy rather than just "+2" We already have the ships, so you just need to add one for land.

What :?
Ships not present +2 autodeploy,ships present territories. How will you present Romans,Persians and Pontus? I can not put Circle in sea and say "these Circle Present Romans". Fleet is symbols for these territories,like in Imperium Romanum,every ship is territory. I dont know how you conclude that ships present +2 autodeploy?
Its very simple but efective solution for +2 autodeploy explanation.
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-7- 12 dec

Postby d.gishman on Sat Dec 13, 2008 5:11 pm

holy crap this looks amazing. graphics wise, the only thing i can say is that the title font and graphic doesn't do the map justice.
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-7- 12 dec

Postby Qwert on Sun Dec 14, 2008 9:39 am

by d.gishman on Sun Dec 14, 2008 12:11 am

holy crap this looks amazing. graphics wise, the only thing i can say is that the title font and graphic doesn't do the map justice.

Meaning of these words means good or bad?
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-7- 12 dec

Postby The Neon Peon on Sun Dec 14, 2008 11:00 am

Qwert, I think he means that the map looks really good, but he does not like the title.
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-7- 12 dec

Postby Qwert on Sun Dec 14, 2008 1:11 pm

by The Neon Peon on Sun Dec 14, 2008 6:00 pm

Qwert, I think he means that the map looks really good, but he does not like the title.

Well i can not help with that :lol:
I dont know what is problem,names or style of font?
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-7- 12 dec

Postby d.gishman on Sun Dec 14, 2008 1:54 pm

style+font.
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-7- 12 dec

Postby Qwert on Sun Dec 14, 2008 4:25 pm

by d.gishman on Sun Dec 14, 2008 8:54 pm

style+font.

well its not mine fault,because ancient greeks not write in english letters.
These is Greek letters,and its very diferent from latin letters.
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 14 dec

Postby Qwert on Sun Dec 14, 2008 5:05 pm

new update-diferent design of water,more lighter
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 14 dec

Postby the.killing.44 on Sun Dec 14, 2008 5:14 pm

Latest image didn't work, qwert.
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 14 dec

Postby Qwert on Sun Dec 14, 2008 5:23 pm

now its work
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 14 dec

Postby Balsiefen on Sun Dec 14, 2008 5:34 pm

The shields need something to make them a bit more noticable on the map, (as theyre mostly brown), maybe a glow around them?
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 14 dec

Postby Qwert on Sun Dec 14, 2008 5:51 pm

by Balsiefen on Mon Dec 15, 2008 12:34 am

The shields need something to make them a bit more noticable on the map, (as theyre mostly brown), maybe a glow around them?

Well i want to be all without glow(shields,helmets,ships),but if you think that these is necessary,then i will try to add little glow.
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 14 dec

Postby the.killing.44 on Sun Dec 14, 2008 5:58 pm

qwert wrote:
by Balsiefen on Mon Dec 15, 2008 12:34 am

The shields need something to make them a bit more noticable on the map, (as theyre mostly brown), maybe a glow around them?

Well i want to be all without glow(shields,helmets,ships),but if you think that these is necessary,then i will try to add little glow.

I would say not glow, but a low drop shadow (if you're using Photoshop).
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 14 dec

Postby Qwert on Sun Dec 14, 2008 6:05 pm

I would say not glow, but a low drop shadow (if you're using Photoshop).

hmm,i will try bouth and will add what is best,but probably shadow can be better then glow.
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 17 dec

Postby Qwert on Wed Dec 17, 2008 3:52 pm

fresh new update-new features-extra bonuses-hold 4 crossed swords-+5
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 17 dec

Postby Androidz on Wed Dec 17, 2008 3:54 pm

Your graphical skills always amaze me qwert, another stunning update=)

Cant see anything wrong with it, but could you give us a test with army numbers?
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 17 dec

Postby Qwert on Wed Dec 17, 2008 3:57 pm

by Androidz » Wed Dec 17, 2008 10:54 pm

Your graphical skills always amaze me qwert, another stunning update=)

well,more or less,its kind a FF stage update,everything is same,just change a little things,like instead +2 i put new helmets to present these bonuses,and also add swords.
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 17 dec

Postby Androidz on Wed Dec 17, 2008 4:00 pm

qwert wrote:
by Androidz » Wed Dec 17, 2008 10:54 pm

Your graphical skills always amaze me qwert, another stunning update=)

well,more or less,its kind a FF stage update,everything is same,just change a little things,like instead +2 i put new helmets to present these bonuses,and also add swords.


Well i was talking about the map in general. =) Anyway i edit the post above before you posted.
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 17 dec

Postby whitestazn88 on Wed Dec 17, 2008 4:02 pm

i really like the update. the new helmets for autodeploy solved your problem with space in the legend, the helmets for +1 also helped with space.

i don't know if i like the +5 for swords bonus though. i don't know why, but i just don't like it yet...
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 17 dec

Postby Qwert on Wed Dec 17, 2008 4:30 pm

by whitestazn88 » Wed Dec 17, 2008 11:02 pm

i really like the update. the new helmets for autodeploy solved your problem with space in the legend, the helmets for +1 also helped with space.

i don't know if i like the +5 for swords bonus though. i don't know why, but i just don't like it yet...

Why? Its extra bonuse-if you hold all 4 get +5, its not easy to get these bonuses,because like you know all territories(except starting)start neutral.
i must say that i see some maps who give much then here(i start first game in Arms race and whas :shock: when i see +50 bonus for holding 10 territory)
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 17 dec

Postby yeti_c on Wed Dec 17, 2008 4:38 pm

1) "Lesbians" - amusing.
2) Fonts - far too small - this is the large map yet the writing is barely legible - it's gonna be impossible on the small.

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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 17 dec

Postby whitestazn88 on Wed Dec 17, 2008 4:45 pm

qwert wrote:
by whitestazn88 » Wed Dec 17, 2008 11:02 pm

i really like the update. the new helmets for autodeploy solved your problem with space in the legend, the helmets for +1 also helped with space.

i don't know if i like the +5 for swords bonus though. i don't know why, but i just don't like it yet...

Why? Its extra bonuse-if you hold all 4 get +5, its not easy to get these bonuses,because like you know all territories(except starting)start neutral.
i must say that i see some maps who give much then here(i start first game in Arms race and whas :shock: when i see +50 bonus for holding 10 territory)


the bonus is a good size and its fine, but i think it's weird because that's the only bonus besides hoplites, but those are only +1. its just a little bit strange because there is almost no other bonus. do you know what i mean qwert?

the map will still be good with that bonus i'm sure, but it was still a really good map if there was no +5 bonus
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 17 dec

Postby Qwert on Wed Dec 17, 2008 4:54 pm

by yeti_c » Wed Dec 17, 2008 11:38 pm

1) "Lesbians" - amusing.
2) Fonts - far too small - this is the large map yet the writing is barely legible - it's gonna be impossible on the small.

1)Yes i know,but these is same like WTF in WWII EUROPE Map,soon or later people will learn that some words have more meaning then just one.
2)No,these is small map,and font is very good readibile,you are first to say that can not read good.

the bonus is a good size and its fine, but i think it's weird because that's the only bonus besides hoplites, but those are only +1. its just a little bit strange because there is almost no other bonus. do you know what i mean qwert?

the map will still be good with that bonus i'm sure, but it was still a really good map if there was no +5 bonus

well i just think that will be good to have some extra bonuses,who will not spoil present gameplay,and if people think that these is not good,i will remove these other bonuses.
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 17 dec

Postby The Neon Peon on Wed Dec 17, 2008 6:00 pm

Looks very nice, well done on the bonuses and legends.

I had some trouble finding the bonus in Dronian Islands... Is is just me, or does it seem to blend in?
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Re: PELOPONNESIAN WAR 431 BC-UPDATE!map description p1-8- 17 dec

Postby Qwert on Wed Dec 17, 2008 6:33 pm

by The Neon Peon » Thu Dec 18, 2008 1:00 am

Looks very nice, well done on the bonuses and legends.

I had some trouble finding the bonus in Dronian Islands... Is is just me, or does it seem to blend in?

Please use correct name of territory-Dorian cycladians(i know that is strange name), so how you figure that these territory have bonuses?;)
I must say,that im not put in map anything what i can not see good.
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