Moderator: Community Team










Wayne wrote:Wow, with a voice like that Dancing Mustard must get all the babes!
Garth wrote:Yeah, I bet he's totally studly and buff.

Dancing Mustard wrote:Hmm, that title doesn't seem catchy enough. What about:
"Soldier suddenly decides he's in the wrong line of work when asked to do his job"
"What? I thought this was money for nothing? - Says 21 year old grunt"
"Random 21 Year Old has personal opinion. Why should we care?"
"I'm at the bottom of the army's command chain. That makes my views relevant... right?"
I think all of those do the story justice while still packing reader-hooking punch. What do you reckon? Should we stop the presses?
















heavycola wrote:So he joins the army in wartime, then finds his feelings about war change? What the hell were they in the first place? Then he wrote to his mum because the shouty man made him say a bad word? Jesus, what did he think the army was??
















An obligation-free source of money apparently.heavycola wrote:what did he think the army was??
Wayne wrote:Wow, with a voice like that Dancing Mustard must get all the babes!
Garth wrote:Yeah, I bet he's totally studly and buff.

comic boy wrote:Quite Frankly if a soldier doesn't want to fight then it is absurd of the military to try and force him, kick him out or let him leave the army.
Wayne wrote:Wow, with a voice like that Dancing Mustard must get all the babes!
Garth wrote:Yeah, I bet he's totally studly and buff.

Dancing Mustard wrote:hole-digger





Frigidus wrote:Dancing Mustard wrote:hole-digger
Now that would look good on a resume.
Wayne wrote:Wow, with a voice like that Dancing Mustard must get all the babes!
Garth wrote:Yeah, I bet he's totally studly and buff.















Dancing Mustard wrote:comic boy wrote:Quite Frankly if a soldier doesn't want to fight then it is absurd of the military to try and force him, kick him out or let him leave the army.
Then make him pay back all the public money that he's wasted by recieving training for something that he knew he didn't want to do. After all, it's a job, not an adventure-holiday version of the dole.







































































Juan_Bottom wrote:Dancing Mustard wrote:Hmm, that title doesn't seem catchy enough. What about:
"Soldier suddenly decides he's in the wrong line of work when asked to do his job"
"What? I thought this was money for nothing? - Says 21 year old grunt"
"Random 21 Year Old has personal opinion. Why should we care?"
"I'm at the bottom of the army's command chain. That makes my views relevant... right?"
I think all of those do the story justice while still packing reader-hooking punch. What do you reckon? Should we stop the presses?
How about "Army recruites lower class kids because their minds are easier to control and they have no life options, one tries to break free"
Or is it too long?





Users browsing this forum: mookiemcgee