Negative feedbacks:
Honestly, there's nothing I like in this map....
Moreover, it's actually so ugly that I cannot look it more than 5 seconds!
(Please, consider this only as my personal opinion, also 'cause I still don't know if I be able to do better!)
This map haven't got any appeal, at least try to improve the graphics, in order to let me have a look also on its playability!
Neutral feedbacks:
In a corner of your map, find the place for a very small USA map where to locate this state.
Could you tell us something about the big bell? (is related to any historycal issue of your State?) If yes, could try to improve the bell image and to integrate it better with the map, if not or if you cannot do it, I suggest to erase it!
As someone of you already said in a previous post, it could be a good idea to make a map of a whole region and not only of this State...
Why do not take some idea from Pennsylvania's history?
for more info about it:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/History_of_Pennsylvania
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/New_Sweden
for others general info about the state:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pennsylvania
Could you take some ideas from the following two maps in order to improve yours, please?
