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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Mon Jan 26, 2009 6:32 pm

Treasure Map v14
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Name: Treasure Map
Cartographer: LED ZEPPELINER
Territories: 49
Continents: 7
Special Features: Boats can bombard any territory on Grendelia except X. x starts with 10 neutral units, other territories on Grendelia start with 7 neutral units, and are killing neutrals
Objective: hold X for two turns to win
v15
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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby the.killing.44 on Mon Jan 26, 2009 6:34 pm

Legibility is still a huge issue here.

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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Mon Jan 26, 2009 7:16 pm

the.killing.44 wrote:Legibility is still a huge issue here.

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i have no trouble reading anything but that may just be because i spend the most time out of (im sure) everybody looking at this map
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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby sailorseal on Mon Jan 26, 2009 7:23 pm

Dude you really need to start making some better changes. Each draft nothing seems to change. The way you have drawn lines around the writing at the bottom detracts from the map
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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Mon Jan 26, 2009 7:25 pm

sailorseal wrote:The way you have drawn lines around the writing at the bottom detracts from the map

how so?...
is it better than what i had b4?
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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby the.killing.44 on Mon Jan 26, 2009 7:57 pm

I agree with sailorseal here (SHOCKER!)

You need to find a new font, turn down the glow, and yes I would get rid of the lines at the bottom.

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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Mon Jan 26, 2009 8:00 pm

the.killing.44 wrote:I agree with sailorseal here (SHOCKER!)

You need to find a new font, turn down the glow, and yes I would get rid of the lines at the bottom.

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o.k. i'll get started, maybe if you go online i could send you a newer version to see if i am doing what you are talking of
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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby JweezyIII on Tue Jan 27, 2009 5:43 pm

Ur trusting sailorseal with fonts but changing the font would not hurt
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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Tue Jan 27, 2009 5:52 pm

i will adress the fonts soon, if any of you stumble upon a cool font that you think would work well, let me know
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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby sailorseal on Tue Jan 27, 2009 8:20 pm

LED ZEPPELINER wrote:i will adress the fonts soon, if any of you stumble upon a cool font that you think would work well, let me know


I say a old time scripty font that is cool but easy to read
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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Tue Jan 27, 2009 8:34 pm

sailorseal wrote:
LED ZEPPELINER wrote:i will adress the fonts soon, if any of you stumble upon a cool font that you think would work well, let me know


I say a old time scripty font that is cool but easy to read

i see, i thought that the font i had sort of matched that criteria, but i will keep looking. i have adressed all of the other issues, and am just waiting to find a good font
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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Tue Jan 27, 2009 11:04 pm

i have found a new font, and i will post an update with it tomarrow
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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Wed Jan 28, 2009 7:42 am

wait, do i need to change the font of the legend or the rules at the bottom? (i think that the legend is fine, but i can do whatever with the bottom?
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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby Premier2k on Wed Jan 28, 2009 5:08 pm

Wow, I cannot believe how much this map has come on since I last looked. Great work Led!
Still not liking the boxes around the text at the bottom though. But really good progress on this!

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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Wed Jan 28, 2009 5:55 pm

Premier2k wrote:Wow, I cannot believe how much this map has come on since I last looked. Great work Led!
Still not liking the boxes around the text at the bottom though. But really good progress on this!

Premier2k

thanx a ton, ur map is looking pretty good to, i have gotten rid of the boxes, but i am wondering if i should change the font where the rules are at the bottom?
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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby sailorseal on Wed Jan 28, 2009 6:21 pm

the.killing.44 wrote:I agree with sailorseal here (SHOCKER!)

You need to find a new font, turn down the glow, and yes I would get rid of the lines at the bottom.

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OMG, then you know I MUST be right if he agrees!
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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Wed Jan 28, 2009 6:40 pm

will nobody answer my question should i change the font on the rules thing on the bottom?
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Re: Treasure Map v15 pgs.1&12 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby the.killing.44 on Wed Jan 28, 2009 6:42 pm

LED ZEPPELINER wrote:will nobody answer my question should i change the font on the rules thing on the bottom?

You posted the question 45 minutes ago, calm down. No, you shouldn't, just make it neater.

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Re: Treasure Map v15.7 pgs.1&13 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Wed Jan 28, 2009 7:35 pm

Treasure Map v14
INFO
Name: Treasure Map
Cartographer: LED ZEPPELINER
Territories: 49
Continents: 7
Special Features: Boats can bombard any territory on Grendelia except X. x starts with 10 neutral units, other territories on Grendelia start with 7 neutral units, and are killing neutrals
Objective: hold X for two turns to win
15.7
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Re: Treasure Map v15.7 pgs.1&13 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby sailorseal on Wed Jan 28, 2009 7:37 pm

Completely awesome but I would put a mountain between The Horn and X also make the text at the bottom look better while keeping it easy to read
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Re: Treasure Map v15.7 pgs.1&13 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Wed Jan 28, 2009 7:53 pm

sailorseal wrote:Completely awesome but I would put a mountain between The Horn and X

the problem with that is then if somebody were to go from new port to try and get to X, it would be easier than if the went from Northern Bound (if i added mountains there)
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Re: Treasure Map v15.7 pgs.1&13 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Wed Jan 28, 2009 9:45 pm

sailorseal wrote: also make the text at the bottom look better while keeping it easy to read

what would you (or anybody) suggest
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Re: Treasure Map v15.7 pgs.1&13 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby JweezyIII on Wed Jan 28, 2009 9:53 pm

I might work on the mountains.
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Re: Treasure Map v15.7 pgs.1&13 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby hohohohote on Wed Jan 28, 2009 9:55 pm

i think the neutral player should always start with the X, cuz it would be too easy to win if a player started with it
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Re: Treasure Map v15.7 pgs.1&13 ¡NEED COMMENTS PLEASE!

Postby LED ZEPPELINER on Wed Jan 28, 2009 9:57 pm

hohohohote wrote:i think the neutral player should always start with the X, cuz it would be too easy to win if a player started with it

um if you look at the bottom... "X(starts with 10)"
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