Kirthanin

[fisherman5]

been busy this week so took me awhile to find a good texture and then figure out how to apply it correctly but what do you guys think?

updates
-added texture to the continents



that line bothers me to but can't find away to get rid of it

[Contrickster]

Texture makes a big difference. It now looks more professional.

But, still, Agh, too complicated. Do I have to play that?

Also the luminous pink arrows stand out too much.

[fisherman5]

i put the arrows there only to represent the attack paths I have fiddled with a few different options but decided i need to find a background first

[Contrickster]

How many countries are there in total? I think there are at least a dozen too many. You may need to apply artistic licence to the map in the book. Cut dozen or so territories out and it will look a better map to play.

[fisherman5]

55 as it stands now i think i will look into droping it down to say 48 or 54

[Contrickster]

55 as it stands now i think i will look into droping it down to say 48 or 54

Try for lower still.

Also, do you need - if I'm reading it right - more than one separated country continent?

You seem to have brown and light green separated country continents.

A good idea done once is enough.

[fisherman5]

well(heres the sentence most foundry ppl hate) in the book a draal is a forest where Great Bears live and a gyre is a place where dragons land and rest

if your interested in the book its based off of it the site is http://www.bindingoftheblade.com/

[fisherman5]

ok i went back and made the map in both 54 and 48 here they are
48 map


Removed
-Eralon
-Rolandes
-S. Kiruan
-Col Marena
-Hol Oradin
-Anakor
-Tajiradraal

Countries.......Territories.....Borders
Nolethanin..........5..............6
Talira.................4..............4
Werethanin.........8..............18
Enthanin.............5..............10
Suthanin..............7..............12
Forbidden Isle......4..............2
Draals.................5..............15
Gyres.................10..............23

54 map

Removed
Eralon

Countries.......Territories.....Borders
Nolethanin..........5..............6
Talira..............4..............5
Werethanin..........11.............20
Enthanin............5..............13
Suthanin............7..............12
Forbidden Isle......4..............2
Draals..............6..............21
Gyres...............12..............24

[Contrickster]

48 Map is better. Now remove one of the separated country continents.

With brown and green it makes the map a cluttered mess IMO.

[fisherman5]

anybody elses opinion?

[KEYOGI]

anybody elses opinion?

Make a poll to see whether anyone actually wants to play your map. I'm not a fan personally.