Moderator: Cartographers
Xyl wrote:A couple of suggestions for Europe Jr.:
"West-er Europe"
"England"
Spritzking wrote:er maybe show them your map without names, and let them fill it in. it will be hilarious. full of crazy result, that are i think far better, then names as europe jr...
KEYOGI wrote:Ok, we all know where I stand on this map but I think it's time I weigh in with some constructive critism anyway.![]()
First thing I would like to mention is the names. I get the map is trying to be cute and a little humorous, but I think some of the names go beyond this and are verging on ridiculous. How stupid is this 7 year old? I mean, if they can draw a map of the world, they should be able to identify the countries and continents they've drawn a little better. Names I have a particular problem with are Europe Jr, Irakistan, More Russia, Conga and the spelling correction in Australia. I think the following would be more appropriate for a 7 year old, if not so funny to some of you:
Europe Jr = France, Spain or an actual country
Irakistan = Middle East
More Russia = maybe have East and West in there, I'm not sure
Conga = South Africa
Australia = just have the correct spelling
I realise the ideas might not be as funny or whatever to some of you, but once the idea of these wear of the idea is kind of lame in my opinion. 7 year olds aren't that dense so it all seems a little over the top.
The Canada/USA border seems over the top as well. It can be easily fixed to reflect real country borders. I'm not sure why there are so many gaps around the Europe Jr/Germany/Arabia area and as such you've had to add in another sea type connection. I'd suggest extending Arabia up to fill in the gaps and remove that connection. I also think having a world map without China is like having a meat pie without sauce (Australian thing). Perhaps it can be worked in around the Russia/More Russia thing.
The compass is another example of this over the top approach. A 7 year old should have no trouble identifying North, East, South and West. Plus the S is around backwards, the only S on the map to do so.
Those are my major concerns for now, I'll let you respond to those before I get carried away with my novel.
KEYOGI wrote:The compass is another example of this over the top approach. A 7 year old should have no trouble identifying North, East, South and West. Plus the S is around backwards, the only S on the map to do so.
KraphtOne wrote:when you sign up a new account one of the check boxes should be "do you want to foe colton24 (it is highly recommended) "
KEYOGI wrote:Ok, we all know where I stand on this map but I think it's time I weigh in with some constructive critism anyway.![]()
First thing I would like to mention is the names. I get the map is trying to be cute and a little humorous, but I think some of the names go beyond this and are verging on ridiculous. How stupid is this 7 year old? I mean, if they can draw a map of the world, they should be able to identify the countries and continents they've drawn a little better. Names I have a particular problem with are Europe Jr, Irakistan, More Russia, Conga and the spelling correction in Australia. I think the following would be more appropriate for a 7 year old, if not so funny to some of you:
Europe Jr = France, Spain or an actual country
Irakistan = Middle East
More Russia = maybe have East and West in there, I'm not sure
Conga = South Africa
Australia = just have the correct spelling
I realise the ideas might not be as funny or whatever to some of you, but once the idea of these wear of the idea is kind of lame in my opinion. 7 year olds aren't that dense so it all seems a little over the top.
The Canada/USA border seems over the top as well. It can be easily fixed to reflect real country borders. I'm not sure why there are so many gaps around the Europe Jr/Germany/Arabia area and as such you've had to add in another sea type connection. I'd suggest extending Arabia up to fill in the gaps and remove that connection. I also think having a world map without China is like having a meat pie without sauce (Australian thing). Perhaps it can be worked in around the Russia/More Russia thing.
The compass is another example of this over the top approach. A 7 year old should have no trouble identifying North, East, South and West. Plus the S is around backwards, the only S on the map to do so.
Those are my major concerns for now, I'll let you respond to those before I get carried away with my novel.
Skittles! wrote:N- Never
E- Eat
S- Soggy
W- Weetbix.
That's how we remember it when we were young. You should put it around the compass.
If you don't know what Weetbix is, it's a type of cereal.
Skittles! wrote:N- Never
E- Eat
S- Soggy
W- Weetbix.
That's how we remember it when we were young. You should put it around the compass.
If you don't know what Weetbix is, it's a type of cereal.
The Random One wrote:Skittles! wrote:N- Never
E- Eat
S- Soggy
W- Weetbix.
That's how we remember it when we were young. You should put it around the compass.
If you don't know what Weetbix is, it's a type of cereal.
That's pretty useless if you don't know where to start and whether you should write clockwise or counterclockwise. It's easier to just remember what the directions are.
Or, maybe I was a really nerdy kid. Yeah, I was.
boberz wrote:KEYOGI wrote:Ok, we all know where I stand on this map but I think it's time I weigh in with some constructive critism anyway.![]()
First thing I would like to mention is the names. I get the map is trying to be cute and a little humorous, but I think some of the names go beyond this and are verging on ridiculous. How stupid is this 7 year old? I mean, if they can draw a map of the world, they should be able to identify the countries and continents they've drawn a little better. Names I have a particular problem with are Europe Jr, Irakistan, More Russia, Conga and the spelling correction in Australia. I think the following would be more appropriate for a 7 year old, if not so funny to some of you:
Europe Jr = France, Spain or an actual country
Irakistan = Middle East
More Russia = maybe have East and West in there, I'm not sure
Conga = South Africa
Australia = just have the correct spelling
I realise the ideas might not be as funny or whatever to some of you, but once the idea of these wear of the idea is kind of lame in my opinion. 7 year olds aren't that dense so it all seems a little over the top.
The Canada/USA border seems over the top as well. It can be easily fixed to reflect real country borders. I'm not sure why there are so many gaps around the Europe Jr/Germany/Arabia area and as such you've had to add in another sea type connection. I'd suggest extending Arabia up to fill in the gaps and remove that connection. I also think having a world map without China is like having a meat pie without sauce (Australian thing). Perhaps it can be worked in around the Russia/More Russia thing.
The compass is another example of this over the top approach. A 7 year old should have no trouble identifying North, East, South and West. Plus the S is around backwards, the only S on the map to do so.
Those are my major concerns for now, I'll let you respond to those before I get carried away with my novel.
I think you may be missing the fun of this map, we all accept that it will not be as fun once the novelty wears off and some of the names may be slightly exagerated it but it is just a laug and a very well presented one at that
Evil DIMwit wrote:I have changed the large version a bit: The "Jr." is gone from Europe and now it says "China" instead of "East India".
Evil DIMwit wrote:I'm working on the small version right now, but it's taking a while to transfer from vectors to rasters.
I have changed the large version a bit: The "Jr." is gone from Europe and now it says "China" instead of "East India".
As for the XML, I'm considering it -- if I do change it I'll have to add something on the map saying, for instance, "you get 2 minimum armies each turn".
Users browsing this forum: No registered users