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unriggable wrote:Make the army circles in the buildings less transparent.
lt_oddball wrote:I see this concept now for the first time.
At first I thought what a sick mind to think of using this hellish situation in a game.
What is next ? Camps of Dachau ? Conquer barracks, and if you have all watchtowers in the corner or the gasovens you have a big bonus..
But perhaps this is a hidden attempt to keep that bit of history known to new generation kids.
Anyway.
You are this far. then finish the map :
Regarding the poem...you leave a big space reserved for it, without even showing all of it.
Then better choose a (few) impressing quotes from it and a website link for reference.
That's 4 lines max.
Gives you more gameboard space .
gimil wrote:I find the poem rather difficult to read could you perhaps darken it a little?
natty_dread wrote:I was wrong
gimil wrote:lovely . Maybe a very light cream outergolw on the poem to finish it off?
Also with hte title maybe a darker purple and reduce the stroke by a px or 2? jsut to make it look a little tidier.
One last thing. The boarder between hunt, frew and sri nakarim seem to meet below the impassable in the area. could these not meet up under hte impassable instead?
natty_dread wrote:I was wrong
gimil wrote:Title looks much better now. And im not satisfied with the glow maybe that wasn't my best suggestion
to help the huts stand out on the main map could you try putting a 1-2 px stroke of the huts name color?
and burma west isnt clear in the legends, you really need to strain your eyes to look at it
p.s sorry if im a pain in your ass
EDIT: maybe the glow could work if the intensity was decreased or you reduced the spread of the glow.
Gilligan wrote:I'M SO GOOD AT THIS GAME
My stepmom locked the bathroom door
So I opened the lock with my shoelace
The Fuzzy Pengui wrote:I think the map looks nice, but i have one question....the title says
WWII: Thai-Burma Death Railway: New Design V13 (P11)
where is page 11!
natty_dread wrote:I was wrong
DiM wrote:the new title looks like it's written over the old title. you can still see some old bits behind the new one.
natty_dread wrote:I was wrong
gimil wrote::shock: what happened to the title i liked the last version better
The glow on the huts is fine. But maybe bring in down a few px. Also maybe put the glow round the big huts as well to make that connection a little clearer.
And the legends are much better now
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